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PaskaNaakka
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I did a pone
 
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Basically i just took the colours from Rarity’s curtain thingy from the last episode because i was curious about how they would look on a pony. What do y’all think?
 
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PaskaNaakka
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
A Lovely Nightmare Night - Celebrated the 12th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Princess of Love - Extra special version for those who participated in the Canterlot Wedding 10th anniversary event by contributing art.
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
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@luna the great!  
A pinker shade might work, i’ll have to see once i get my computer back online.
 
What i really like about the colour scheme personally is how it manages to remind me of several sweet foods at once; part blueberry yogurt, part ice cream and part that one type of strawberry licorice candy i haven’t had in ages but now suddenly crave. Oddly specific, i know, but there you go.
Sparx
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#115 Wassup Voltage!
Well I have quite a number of Ocs but one that mostly catches the eye of being ‘edgy’ is Axl through appearance alone.
If he was to fit him into the canon universe securely there would probably be less emphasis on his talents. But I think he’d fit well in a alt universe similar to RWBY but with more light hearted tone.
Backstory is rather tame but not completely fleshed out. He has no dead family members and his job is being part of a small guild. Such duties can include exploration,construction work, even deliveries,bodyguards or dealing with beasties. All that good stuff.
Speciality would have to be his skill/dexterity with blades.He is able to switch styles and stances with ease despite their weight. This also helps with his creativity and how versatile he can be in situations when working with others.He can effortless wields a two handed broad sword for instance.
Personality
Axl is relatively composed and serious through most things. However he lightens up and can be flustered when around his friends or when caught off guard/flatfooted.(Mostly by Whitefire)
While he can be polite and courteous if he so chooses, in the past he has proven to be quite arrogant and cocky when dealing with matters independently. He has since matured into a more pragmatic individual…though he has his off days.
Overall he seems to exhibit a relaxed mood unless he’s distracted by silliness, Whitefire’s butt or when his friends encourage him.
While he prefers working together with others he’s trying to adjust to handling things on his own. But he dislikes being aloooone.
I initially received some gift art from friends for him since he started out in Pony creator with Time Turner’s mane and black
Warning signs include him being more or less black coated and having red eyes. BUT he wears a red scarf.
A few times I’ve let the artist know they’re free to change his eye colour to purple to see if it looks better.
Greyscale drawing of him drawing of him
Drawn by another friend.
Then I got some commissions of him
But anyway what do you guys think? XD This is probably the first time I’ve shown him to people not in the close knit rp communities I’m apart of. So I’m curious to know what feedback there is.
 
Sooo any thoughts on Axl? :o
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I have an oc named Icarus. She is a glassblower by family trade but eventually becomes a black smith. Not sure what her cutie mark should be. Hammer and anvil? Melted glass?
 
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@Ranch
 
I love her design. I can’t even find anything that needs tweaking.
 
I think melted glass would be a good choice… Maybe being poured from some sort of metal container? So it shows a bit of both her talents?
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@Marx  
My only problem I can find with his design (he’s the dark one) is that his color scheme keeps changing from pic to pic, probably because of the different artists. I know a lot of people will try to tell you that black is a terrible color for an OC, but I say go for it.
 
@Ranch  
I like her design. Is she magical though? Why is there an aura around her neck pendant?
Background Pony #C7B7
@Kirb
 
Enchanted by a dead grandma to respond to the sound of her voice. She uses to record her thoughts.
 
Glad you both like the design!
PaskaNaakka
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
A Lovely Nightmare Night - Celebrated the 12th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Princess of Love - Extra special version for those who participated in the Canterlot Wedding 10th anniversary event by contributing art.
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
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Magnificence - Artist with 100+ Safe/Suggestive images with over 100 upvotes, and 5+ Questionable/Explicit images with over 350 upvotes
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.
Ten years of changes - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of MLP:FiM!

PM me Maud pics
So, i was playing some Morrowind the other day and while harvesting alchemy ingredients i happened to pick up some bittergreen petals.
 
And then all of a sudden it popped into my head that Bittergreen Petal kinda sounds like a pony name.  
And then i designed a character just based around that name because that’s what i do when i get bored.
 
Bittergreen Petal (alternatively just Bittergreen) is an earth pony herbalist with a particular interest in poisonous or otherwise unpleasant plants.
 
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Also a herbal tea enthusiast, but no one ever wants to try her special brew. Gotta wonder why.
 
Based the design of her hair on nettles and some vines i saw growing in the yard.
 
Tried a more yellowy/amber eye colour, i think i prefer it:
 
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The nettle leaf also became her CM. It’s a pretty common, recognisable example of a nasty plant you don’t want to touch, i think. Goes well with her slightly prickly personality. Seems my characters are never all sweet and friendly for some reason.
 
Some tweaks to be made, probably. Mainly the eyes, i think. Any thoughts?
luna the great!
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@PaskaNaakka
 
The grey streak of the mane should be tinted more of a green- it seems to be very slightly blue already, but it still looks a little off. It doesn’t have to be a true dark green, but a little more colour would help it look nicer next to the other stripes of her mane.
 
The eyes, which you’ve already mentioned needing to adjust. They definitely stick out too much against the coat. The amber idea is nice, but try a more desaturated version. Other than that she looks nice, and she seems to be a good character.
Background Pony #ED5F
@PaskaNaakka
 
Nice colors. The amber/gold eyes stand out in a good way, and a pretty good combination of greens. Really she looks just like you described her personality, lol.
PaskaNaakka
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).
Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
A Lovely Nightmare Night - Celebrated the 12th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Princess of Love - Extra special version for those who participated in the Canterlot Wedding 10th anniversary event by contributing art.
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
Non-Fungible Trixie -
Magnificence - Artist with 100+ Safe/Suggestive images with over 100 upvotes, and 5+ Questionable/Explicit images with over 350 upvotes
Twinkling Balloon - Took part in the 2021 community collab.
Ten years of changes - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of MLP:FiM!

PM me Maud pics
@Background Pony #AE7F  
Coincidentally, i just did a couple of quick drawings of her:
 

 

 
I quite like the design too, if i do say so myself. Although Midnight Dew is still my personal favourite of the two OCs i’ve “properly” developed. I like the blue :V
 
 
@Background Pony #1849  
I’ve not done a whole lot with her, on the other hand. I probably should do something with her, the design has potential. I just have this weird thing about my OCs where i feel like they should fit into each others’ stories somehow. Like with Midnight Dew and Bittergreen, one is a herbalist and the other an oneiromancer so i can easily imagine them getting together and having a chat about sleep-inducing herbal remedies. That sort of thing.
Ranch
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I need opinions on this.
 
Yesterday I tried drawing a diamond dog/pony hybrid. I don’t know what you would call this. A Dony? Essentially his body is majority diamond dog but he has hooves instead of back paws. Optional horns if one of the parents is a unicorn. I put the horn on his nose because it felt more natural than the forehead. You’ll probably never see one of these hybrids with wings even with a pegasi parent, like there is something coded in diamond dog dna where they much rather prefer the ground.
 
The color pallet is vibrant for a diamond dog but still a bit on the dull side when compared to most pony coats.
 
I posted with two different tail designs because I couldn’t make up my mind which one to keep.
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