critique me?(NSFW)

Hi im curious to get feed back from people on my stuff (strickly because the comment section is not really filled out often on here for my stuff…) I want to get better so I have people request images and I do them for free
 
(currecntly soon ill be charging for 5 bucks per posing but that later down the road when im better.) so what do you guys think got requests and feedback for my work look it up (artist:mr.tektite) if you do leave it here or on the actual pics pleaseandthankyou
 
https://derpiboo.ru/search?utf8=_E29C_{93&sbq=artist}3Amr.tektite&commit=Go
 
http://mr-tektites-sfm-blog-nsfw.tumblr.com/
 
examples of some of my stuff
 

 

 

 
any feedback at all would be nice for example stuff like:  
Wow you did____ well but the ____ wasent really that good
 
or I really like the _____ I dont think ______ fits
 
or just the standard ideas for future or maybe artist that do stuff in sfm that can help me improve can give a few pointers
 
(NOTICE ONLY THE FIRST IMAGE IS SFM the rest are gmod but all future stuff will be sfm)

You may want to put a NSFW warning in the thread title, direct linking images doesn’t make them spoilered.

@Grieffon  
thaaaaaaank you… so nothin on the art then?

Try experimenting some more with lighting is either too dull or too bright or just lacking in places, model clipping through objects and that vagina seems too wide and empty unless that was what you were going for.

@PwnyPony  
thanks ill keep it in mind. experementing with ligts actually and open space is a good point so ill work on that

 
 
Does this stuff look better then previous pics ive done? I’m using photo shop elements 11 to improve and alter bits as well and was hoping these could be critiqued as well… Assuming anyone can still see this thread…
 
Anyones opinion on were bits look like they need improvement is appreciated

@Mr.Tektite  
It is a huge improvement, but there is still the clipping through objects issue but it must be impossible to have that Fluttershy model in that position without clipping issues.
 
I think it would have worked better if it was at the side of the bed and her mane was falling down the side of the bed rather than into the bed.

@PwnyPony  
Thanks I’ll remember that next time I use the beds. I have trouble with the mains every time I do stuff so ill try to see if that works.

 
 

 
 

 
Soooo watcha think forum? Any critiques… I know im doing alot better then when I started XD but critiques are still wanted from overall work improvement or tutorials I should look into … Anything is helpful really as long as detailed or atleast descriptive in whats good and bad

@Mr.Tektite  
Criticizing gets harder the better the work is and anything I say is pretty much base on opinion now but I guess you could do more to set the scenes. It looks off when they are in the empty backness.  
Scenes like the final one could be a good idea.

@PwnyPony  
The last ones actually based off a pic that comboni32 made a bit back I started with the sketch but he made a background and I realized I could do a pic of it with a similar background. Came out well enough probably made the left to dark and cold looking but ehhh Im happy with it took more work then I thought it would though  

Where did you get the mare vagina model? I already have a horse dick, just need a mare vagina and I am set to make clop pic

@nathanmcmsf  
where did u get the horse parts

@Background Pony #1B5A  
nice addition 8 MONTHS LATER XD

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
So guys I completly forgot this thread was active… hows my progress? XD

WHERE DO I GET THE HORSE GENITALS? please answer@Mr.Tektite

@Background Pony #FE14  
Ive written this plenty of times but ill suffice to say. My models arnt all on the internet for free to use BUT a few are now. Dick models anyway. Anthro dicks are on sfmlab and the one i used to use is marked on my blog…errr somewere anyway. also theres always rubez models… ech…

 

 

 

 
Sooooooooooooo. Am I improving?

@Mr.Tektite  
Lighting and fluids are so much better than when you started.

@PwnyPony  

 
:D

@Mr.Tektite  
hm… damng i would like those models cause well… reasons ^^’

@Background Pony #9B1D  
I know that theres a high def dick on sfm lab and butt horses download are somewere on teh internet already. should be under expandable butts. Not sure what the guy labeled them.

 
 
 

 
I found that that looking back at my first pic in sfm. Wich actually was a gift for kevin on his birthday. and looked to were I am now with my latest present to him. I can see improvement (not that it was hard to improve from were I started that is but…hell… Im having fun so far.)

well I’ve made it a small bit of mine to come back and bump this post with my newer art. still taking any suggestions.
 
just so your warned the last 2 images are foalcon. spoiler warning so no one gets triggered o.o
 

 

 

 

 

 
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WARNING FOALCON AHEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

 
just… so you were warned… >~<
 
…aaaaaaaaaany way… pictures spoiler covered incase anyone doesnt like the idea of seeing applebloom getting cream filled. or diamond tiara in the pic after that.
 

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