Alright, so, I’ve been working on a few snips, and I’m a little bereft of people to run them by. I’m not looking for a full proofer, just an honest opinion on a certain bit I’m not sure about. So I’m posting it in here. Thing is, I’m writing it a bit funny… I’m putting it all into a program called Twine, which is a simple html-based CYOA type program. You can run it in any browser, easy peasy, don’t need to download anything but the story/game file.
Tags: Lots of futa, public sex, and “The Rise of Futaquestria” has quite a bit of non-consensual stuff.
So here’s the story/game file
Yes I know it’s zipped, but the easiest place to host it for me is google drive and it doesn’t handle the .html file well.
I’ve got a few pieces in the works here, but the bit I wanted an opinion on was “Ponies Do What Now?” (The first passage is the only one with porn so far, just casual public straight sex/threesome) Specifically, I want to know if I struck a good balance between building up to sexytimes and the joke about Twilight having a fetish for lecturing in the last few pages written so far.
Oh, side note: If you get a blank page, that means I haven’t written anything there yet. Hit the back button and try again. And while I haven’t added images yet, I can and intend to.