I think one of Twilight’s word balloons in panel 3 was supposed to be Pinkie’s. Either that or Twi’s really sarcastic today.

When Twi said, ‘but on one condition’ i was over here thinking:
 

Possible alternative text for Rarity:
 
“Is that a requirement?”  
“That old thing?”
 
and my personal favorite:  
“No, but I always carry a spare.”

“Girls, can’t you see my breasts are trying to explode out of my shirt?”

@tim2984  
Thank you a lot dude :D

@Alex Elias  
https://inkbunny.net/journalview.php?id=168281 for the next chapter

Celestia wants a sex tape? a little perv from her, i hope you continue the comic.

Rarity confirmed for nonvirgin.

Twilight is excited.

Any other VIRGIN SACRIFICES besides me?

@Trahzo  
you should see the kissplayers manga in ‘dengeki hobby’ the latter issues crams 10+ frames and lots of text in one page (all issues of kissplayers are only one page).

There’s not enough space for all of them in the last panel so they had to squeeze in, hahaha!

@Background Pony #F2D0  
And that is the exact reason I find this ‘artist’ to be a no talent hack.

Their heads are identical to ponies.

@danail24  
about the willingness, not all the time but apparently once you it’s in, apparently female brains shut down to all logic and reason.
 
worse are those who can make coherent arguments about their situation in their head then come to the conclusion that it doesn’t really matter.

I really don’t care that there’s an old rotary phone in this comic. It’s a fan work, they can insert whatever technology they want in it. However what I do wonder is why nopony said “WTH Fluttershy! I’m not just going to fuck Spike like that! I don’t do casual sex!”
 
But hey in hentai comics, all the females are willing to have sex at any time. ;D Lolololololol!
 
Also! Celestia’s a perv and everypony is super naive! XD

Sgt. Apone: ‘It’s a rescue mission, you’ll love it. There’s some juicy ponies we have to rescue from their virginity. Heh!’
 
(Later…)
 
Princess Molestia (in Powerloader): ‘Get away from Twi, you BITCH!’
 
X3

@Background Pony #756C  
thanks for the info!  
language barrier aside, english fluency isn’t really a factor in storymaking (having a good translator will do that for you) but a poor story is a poor story no matter what the language IMO.

@OptimusPrimevil  
Out of curiosity I looked up the artist. Looks like they’re from Peru.
 
Incidentally I also discovered they draw a lot of little kids naked and there’s a substantial difference in the number of pieces their name is attached to on here and the number I see in their gallery through my filters.
 
Ick.

@441TheSecond  
what nationality is the artist from?  
possible outcomes i can figure out/speculate is  
A. celestia is lying and doing it for the material  
B. celestia is telling the truth about maredina  
C. celestia is telling a half-truth about maredina. she did exile the dragons and slaves but she herself is a slave/in on it.  
D. adam west having a weeeeird dream

@OptimusPrimevil  
The author can barely speak english.

@Background Pony #756C  
gonna wait until the end though. author might pull off something out of hat/@$$ in the end.

@Background Pony #2D63  
Yeah, seriously. PALCOMIX is the king of picking artists that very clearly have to trade artistic skills for writing chops so both the writing and art come out mediocre at best. That said;
 
@OptimusPrimevil  
You’ve probably thought this story through more than the author at this point.

@Background Pony #756C  
if you add the line about celestia wanting a vid, it’ll make sense that the tale about maredina is made up (twilight knowing nothing about it plays nicely into celestia’s plan if this is a grand sex vid plot) to compel the girls into placating spike