Moondancer should soon begin to wonder if “Fifty Shades of Neigh” was really a good book for learning about how friendship works…

Moondancer: Don’t worry Twilight, I kno one thing that will make this friendship last.
 
Twilight: HMMMPH!

@Twilights-Secret  

 
have we started the fire

Just found this.
 
Read comments.
 
I think this deserves an “adventure in the comments” tag.
 
Also, @Background Pony #D497 no, it’s not to your credit that you write like that as an adult. I mean, yeah, you can write however you like, but people are also free to not like your writing, especially if you don’t take constructive criticism. A good starting point is learning proper English to make things understandable, and capable of being taken seriously.
 
Anyways, back to the original picture; eh, I would comment things like; “what’s her plan, anyways?” But fetish art is fetish art. Usually doesn’t think much beyond the goal of making the fetish happen.
 
“Was getting caught part of your plan?”  
///  
“Your buddy Fluttershy doesn’t fly so well.”  
///
 
“What would happen if I took those wings off?”
 
“It would be extremely painful…”
 
“You’re a big mare.”
 
“-for you.”

Of whoever it was

Name calling that rude

Quit arguing. If you want to give constructive feedback on an attempt at writing a fic, that’s fine, but no need for name calling and such. Please remember Rule #0

@Background Pony #D896  
let it gooo  
let it gooo  
don’t give a shit anymoooore

@Background Pony #D497  
Is this guy related to SwiftieAnon

@CaptainGrumpy  
Probably not old enough to be here.

@Background Pony #D497  
*lying
 
How old are you m80

not lieing I am a adult

People say we can do what ever we want so I can do what I want so just leave it as that I’m no kid I’m an adult

@Background Pony #D497  
>being this much of a rebellious child  
>I-I CAN DO WHATEVER I WANT
 

 
I mean c’mon son
 
Just because you can do whatever you want doesn’t mean you should
 
Listen here kid, walls of texts are a big no no if you’re trying to write a fanfic

So deal with it

I do what ever I want no one tell me what to do

@thps48  
I won’t lie I did laugh… but not at the story and rather the english…

@Poneh-Freak  
No, but weird alternative stories are never not funny. ;3

@Background Pony #D497  
Whatever man… that wasn’t close to what’s happening here anyway.
 
(yes I’m the guy that’s commissioned this)

I like dark ending

@Background Pony #D497  
… okay I can ignore the bad grammar and the lack of punctuation, but why the dark ending?? ._.