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I’ve been working on the scene, but I’ve never seem to get it right.
 
A furnace burned dimly; it’s orange glow lightly illuminating the dark sewer maintenance room. Rarity and her sister laid unconscious on shiny, steel surgical tables. As they slowly begin to regain their conscience then came to the realization that they have been strapped down and binded to the table. They begin to panic for they did not know where they were nor how they got to such a desolate place. As they’re struggling became more intense a cackling laugh came from the shadows of poorly lit room. The indistinguishable sound of metal grinding against concrete came from the hunting figure standing in the corner. It was a bone-chilling sound and made both of their legs grow week. The figure became more distinguishable and the laugh became more horrifyingly distinct as the figure stepped into a light of the furnace.  
His most distinguishable facial feature was the putrid scar that ran down his left eye. His long greasy black mane hung over his right eye and his rancid, unmaintained, back fur made him even more hunting then he was already. He walks slowly towards the two. His God forsaken laugh echoed through the room. It was the stuff of nightmares; his low, crackly, monotone voice could strike fear into the most brave of hearts. As he stood in the middle of the room he began to speak in a strong accent; it was almost German  
“Welcome ladies” he said in his chilling voice.  
“Who are you!? what are doing you!? let me go!” The two Sisters said talking over each other.  
“I’m I can’t do that lady’s.” he said walking over to Rarity examine her profusely.  
“Please let me go.” Rarity said snarking off to the mysterious stranger.  
He stopped looking over her abruptly and let out a smile so cynical that not even the Devil himself could contest it. Showing his horde stain teeth he said:  
“You are a beautiful sample, but useless to me with a snarky attitude” he said in a more serious voice.  
“Uh how would you know beauty have you ever looked in the mirror” Rarity said making reference to his ghastly appearance.  
He quickly turned around and walked back to the shadows making a slight chuckling as he did it. He turned around holding something behind his back using his magic.  
“You brought this on yourself” he said with a smile a mile wide.  
Rarity’s eyes widened as she saw a hatchet raise up from behind him. With all his might be swung at her. Rarity let out an ear piercing scream that echoed through the rest of the sewers. The hatchet was stopped centimeters away from her skull.  
“I’m not that much of a monster to kill for such a petty reason.”  
He turned around and begin to walk but stopped midway.  
“Or am I?”  
He turned around in the blink of an eye and with all his might he plunged his Hatchet directly down the middle of Rarity’s head. The sound of bone splitting and flesh tearing filled the room. Rarity squealed and kicked, but from being restrained by the straps prevented her from doing anything. She begin to jerk ferociously as blood and tears ran down her cheek. Sweetie Belle witnessing the murder of her sister let our scream and saw as the ruthless killer twisted his Hatchet splitting her head in two exposing the innards. Her brain split into and the rest torn in half. Pieces of bone and her eye fell down from the hatchet and blood began to pour over the table and onto the floor. He stepped back and look towards Sweetie Belle. His face blood-covered as he pulled the hatchet from her skull. And let out an evil laugh.  
“Or am I?”
 
I can’t seem to get this right if someone would like to give me pointers I’d appreciate it.
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