My fanfic "The Times of Good-bye" What did the mane 6 did with their lives when they grew up?

Flippydaman

Hi everypony!
 
I am writing a fanfic and I wanted to share it. It’s about the mane 6 growing old and having relationships, foals, careers, crises, and yes, death. It’s a sad fanfic, just so you know it’s not like the last seasons of Friends. Once I finish it, I will make an audio version of it. I will look for volunteers for voice actresses (and a male one for Spike). Yes, it’s just another fanfic and it’s not War and Peace, but it’s mine and I’m proud of it. Also, I’ve used it to learn a lot about writing fiction, which I’m not used to. I read guides and listen to criticism and practiced and stuff.
 
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/366305/the-times-of-good-bye
 
If you want to give me feedback and criticism, go ahead. I try not to be defensive and consider if the feedback has a point. However, if your feedback it’s going to be something like “you suck, eat shit” I’ll just ignore it.
 
Some people have liked it, and I hope you do too.
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