EnderFloofs 
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I was kinda worrying less about character and more about just editing what was there so that it flowed better. That's why I kept his line for that, as it still did the job well. And I don't feel RD would say "smart guy," so I just changed wonderful to awesome 'cause we all know that's her favorite word, but I may be reading her character wrong. Hioshiru did good with keeping character in line, it's just the small changes and flow I'm mainly worried about.
I know i really doesn't matter what they say cause they're gonna fuck anyways, but if language is the weakest part of the comic, it's arguably the easiest part of a piece of work to fix and it improves the quality by THAT much. The artwork is amazing, and thus it deserves worthy dialogue to match it.
The Butt Connoisseur
I was kinda worrying less about character and more about just editing what was there so that it flowed better. That's why I kept his line for that, as it still did the job well. And I don't feel RD would say "smart guy," so I just changed wonderful to awesome 'cause we all know that's her favorite word, but I may be reading her character wrong. Hioshiru did good with keeping character in line, it's just the small changes and flow I'm mainly worried about.
I know i really doesn't matter what they say cause they're gonna fuck anyways, but if language is the weakest part of the comic, it's arguably the easiest part of a piece of work to fix and it improves the quality by THAT much. The artwork is amazing, and thus it deserves worthy dialogue to match it.