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Ooohhh BOI!…This thing…This is without a doubt the worst MLP Fic/comic/whatever I have read.
The thing is about Dr Whooves becoming Discorded…and devolves into nothing but Wangest, Fap folder that doesn’t progress the story, Pointless arcs that go nowhere, Ass pulls on why Doc keeps becoming/ is still discorded, Wangest, Bashing Derpy for petty reasons, Story railroading, forced ships with characters that don’t do much to add anything to the story, Wangest, Hiatus, edginess, and a crap ton of other problems…Did I mention the Wangest?
Notable events (not really in order) include:
Doc whining how Derpy betrayed him (she didn’t)
Doc beating the shit out of Derpy
Doc sleeping with Derpy’s friends
Doc getting his ass kicked by Dinky as revenge for Derpy (The best part in the comic)
Doc sleeping With Twilight cause…reasons!
Doc making Twilight Derpy’s replacement cause…reasons!
Doc saying how Twilight means the world to him (even though she has done jack shit in the story and little to NOTHING will/would have changed if Twilight wasn’t in it) Cause…reasons
Doc dressing in drag (not kidding, that happens)
Doc sleeping with…everyone!
Doc being emo
Doc being more emo
Doc being more emo still
Doc being even more em-You get it.
Discord being nothing like how he actually is in the show.
Discord railroading the story
Doc turns back to normal…For 5 seconds before getting even worse
And the story just now feels like it’s getting somewhere…AFTER 6 YEARS SINCE IT STARTED!
Don’t bother reading it, The story is overly depressing, the main char is unlikable (even with his Freudian Excuse), it doesn’t go anywhere, is riddled with pointless scenes (most of which are just for shock value and nothing more really) and like I said, has been going on for 6 years (at the time I’m typing this) and it feels like it just beguin…
Oh and in a AU where Doc does resist Discord he gets Raped…
Ooohhh BOI!…This thing…This is without a doubt the worst MLP Fic/comic/whatever I have read.
The thing is about Dr Whooves becoming Discorded…and devolves into nothing but Wangest, Fap folder that doesn’t progress the story, Pointless arcs that go nowhere, Ass pulls on why Doc keeps becoming/ is still discorded, Wangest, Bashing Derpy for petty reasons, Story railroading, forced ships with characters that don’t do much to add anything to the story, Wangest, Hiatus, edginess, and a crap ton of other problems…Did I mention the Wangest?
Notable events (not really in order) include:
Doc whining how Derpy betrayed him (she didn’t)
Doc beating the shit out of Derpy
Doc sleeping with Derpy’s friends
Doc getting his ass kicked by Dinky as revenge for Derpy (The best part in the comic)
Doc sleeping With Twilight cause…reasons!
Doc making Twilight Derpy’s replacement cause…reasons!
Doc saying how Twilight means the world to him (even though she has done jack shit in the story and little to NOTHING will/would have changed if Twilight wasn’t in it) Cause…reasons
Doc dressing in drag (not kidding, that happens)
Doc sleeping with…everyone!
Doc being emo
Doc being more emo
Doc being more emo still
Doc being even more em-You get it.
Discord being nothing like how he actually is in the show.
Discord railroading the story
Doc turns back to normal…For 5 seconds before getting even worse
And the story just now feels like it’s getting somewhere…AFTER 6 YEARS SINCE IT STARTED!
Don’t bother reading it, The story is overly depressing, the main char is unlikable (even with his Freudian Excuse), it doesn’t go anywhere, is riddled with pointless scenes (most of which are just for shock value and nothing more really) and like I said, has been going on for 6 years (at the time I’m typing this) and it feels like it just beguin…
Oh and in a AU where Doc does resist Discord he gets Raped…
From what I’ve read from you guys, yeah it does sound like stupid stuff
Lots of dumb stuff.
wait…what? what the heck did i miss over the years after i stop reading these series?
It’s ironic because the creator of Miss Twilight Sparkle abandoned the blog afterwards. Now Dissy is screwing Octavia aka Satellite Love Interest #400
(Face palming increases) sweet everything I’m glad I stopped watching/reading these series
GREAT LOGIC
Yeah, Cuz sex with Emo Twi is totes important to the story guyz!
Okay thank god (may be confusing it for Zerum Whooves then), but another example of edgy behavior for the sake of edge. Not helped that (if I recall), THAT incident is what lead to Dissy and Reject-Twilight having the cha-cha because whynot grimdark blog.
No, I remember.
Twilight Tried to kill herself again. No rape this time (Thank god)
I rememeber a part of Discorded Whooves where Dissy (barf) goes to find Twilight and instead comes across her beaten to the inch of her life. I don’t remember if it was revealed if The Master raped or if she attempted suicide again (since the reoccuring thing of Miss Twilight Sparkle aka Satellite Love-Interest was that she was depressive and suicidal thanks to the events of Cupcakes and shit, which while it could have worked, was poorly executed). I could be misremembering, but I swear that happened in the comic, and considering Jitter’s self-jerking of “I HAVE TO BE AS EDGY AS A CROSSED COMIC”, I wouldn’t be surprised if that is the case.
i don’t think that was a thing.
I remember in Discorded Whooves that The Master raped Twilight.
I could be wrong but I remember that.
Wait what?! When was Twilight raped?
This came out last year I think. Jitters of course denied everything, but it seemed largely forgotten. I know retweets went around and people wondered if it’s legitimate or not. Personally, I’m keeping an open mind to it, but considering Jitters’s habits with Zerum Whooves and having Miss Twilight Sparkle RAPED FOR DRAMA (and poorly mind you)….
wait…what?!
when the heck did this happen?
https://twitter.com/fraidnotbuddy/status/1145420455982981120
Honestly, Not that surprised.
(at least my version of Dissy since Jitters’s version of Dissy is a Fred Durst wannabe).
oh gods i am laughing so hard after reading that! XD
(because I guess they figured Jitters is talented enough to impress them.
Jitters’s art style is good, but their story telling is complete trash.)
i agree with what you say about this. and yeah, his art style is great but…story telling? NOPE! :(
YEP. I remember seeing that rant and going “…Um….you wrote Discorded Whooves. Shut it.”
@MrtheamazingDude
Oh Bedeviled Derpy, you had such promise, such grace…and then Jitters threw it away and decided to make it about the money.
Gag me. I still ship Bedeviled Derpy with Dissy (at least my version of Dissy since Jitters’s version of Dissy is a Fred Durst wannabe).
@Ironwolf
because I guess they figured Jitters is talented enough to impress them.
Jitters’s art style is good, but their story telling is complete trash.
Same! Sighs like seriously…wtf is wrong with these money givers.. :(
That’s what I Want to know Too!
O.o
Wtf…are these “supporters/money givers” freaking idiots who don’t noticed this??
There was an AU to Dicklord Whooves Where Derpy Got Discorded instead of DW. It was Called Bedeviled Derpy
It had a good start but it, Like every other project from Jitters, Stopped updating…And then the person who drew for it wiped the whole blog clean, So you can’t even read it anymore.
Jitters Said they would remake it…If people give him money on his Patreon. But when He got the money, He decided to change it into a different story Called Bedeviled Dotty (With Bunnies instead of Ponies)
So, Yeah. People gave him money to Work on a blog, HE LEFT TO ROT IN THE FIRST PLACE, And instead used it for something different…The worst part is that the Characters in Bedeviled Dotty are literally just MLP chars as Bunnies! So what the fuck was even the point! Oh, and Bedeviled Dotty suffers from slow as pacing like everything else Shitters gets his hands on.
Why More people weren’t pissed off about this, Told Jitters to go fuck himself, and Wrote him off forever is beyond me.
Was waiting for your reply and eyup to what you said.
Especially to the last part you said…wait. what was that part about the au story being given to a bunny???
…Really? The Guy who loves to torture Derpy for no Fucking Reason, is Bitching about how the main 6 were being mean to Flutters?
The guy who had Derpy get the shit kicked out of her, Humiliated, Had her Best friend Fuck her abuser, And give her AU Story to a fucking bunny…Is bitching about a musical Number…There’s no end to Shitters double standers and Hypocrisy is there?
Because GRIM DARK.
Look I can understand someone using abuse in story…but it has to have meaning, not just for SHOCK VALUE. Jitters unfortunately loves using shit like this for shock value, which is ironic considering they once threw a temper tantrum over how “BATS!” caused them to “have a panic attack” during the “Stop the Bats” song number.
No really, the song caused them to have a freak out and said that the ManeSix were being assholes and abusive to Shy.