@王府镇  
嗯？

嗨

@Jerkface  
OK, I will try to do better next time, thanks.

@HBGxh  
Hard for me to say what it is that needs worked on since from an objective standpoint, I at least see no obvious flaws. It might come down to style preferences since I’ve learned when I started drawing that a lot of artists have different perspectives on what should be worked on.
 
If I were to tell you what I’d think should be changed, it’d be:  
-The stallion’s neck, since it looks oddly long.  
-The stallion’s hooves, which look too hard and edged (make them a little rounder, essentially).  
-Add curved lines to the horns of both unicorns.
 
That’s all I’ve really got.

@Jerkface  
I didn’t show most of my artwork to other artists, and they don’t have a lot of feed backs. Some people feel interesting with my arts. However, I really want to know where I need to improve in my artworks.

@HBGxh  
Very odd to say the least. I’m not particularly the best when it comes to critiquing art, but have you shown it to other artists for feedback?

@Jerkface  
Well, I just feel there’s something strange in my drawings. I always feel there is something wrong and bad in my artworks, and I can’t figure out why.

This is very cute!

Weird feeling? Like what, exactly?