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So, I’m trying to make my pone model without copying standard SFM ones (because I don’t really like their proportions, they don’t quite work in 3d). It looked good in preview, so I gave it a test render and got this. Something is wrong with her face but I can’t tell what. Any suggestions how to make it better(except missing wings, of course, it’s a wip)?

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gabe2252
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So Awesome! Great to see new models. Your model is looking great, only thing I would try is maybe give her some slightly puffy cheeks and more of a jaw line. I tried to resist using fake/painted eye reflections for a very long time but I couldn’t make it work. Good luck!
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ComradeFluffski
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It already looks better than the typical sfm models.
 
The only thing that seems a bit off to me, is the transition from the neck into the chin. Maybe it needs to be more defined somehow. This is just my observation. I have no experience in 3d rendering, so take it for what its worth.
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No lo entenderias.
Looking very nice! the hair style adds some points but the, maybe the head you can make it more rounded and about the eyes, maybe you need to use an iris texure with the white reflection effect, that makes ir more “alive” and 3D its a pain to get it right with a light spot.
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