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Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
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And like that Silverstream is soaring in for a second snack.
 
Part twenty of my Collab with Mrleft ( https://derpibooru.org/profiles/Mr-dot-Left09 ). The other parts can be found here:
 
Part one: https://aryion.com/g4/view/583700
 
Part two:https://aryion.com/g4/view/584087
 
Part three: https://aryion.com/g4/view/587826
 
Part four: https://aryion.com/g4/view/588297
 
Part five: https://aryion.com/g4/view/591163
 
Part six: https://aryion.com/g4/view/594512
 
Part seven: https://aryion.com/g4/view/595135
 
Part eight: https://aryion.com/g4/view/601593
 
Part nine: https://aryion.com/g4/view/603009
 
Part ten: https://aryion.com/g4/view/605306
 
Part eleven: https://aryion.com/g4/view/607106
 
Part twelve: https://aryion.com/g4/view/611003
 
Part thirteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/615260
 
Part fourteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/615443
 
Part fifteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/619907
 
Part sixteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/622706
 
Part seventeen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/628417
 
Part eighteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/630521
 
Part nineteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/633569
 
Part twenty: you are here
 
A story in the source as always, please do not repost it in the comments below :)

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Arcan
Solar Supporter - Fought against the New Lunar Republic rebellion on the side of the Solar Deity (April Fools 2023).

All in all im happy with everything as long as i can see more booty and more pussy eating! xD  
And this looks like it will be cotton candy ass. xD
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Background Pony #BCD0
It sounds like all this negativity boils down to differences in taste is all. It’s not especially productive to complain about, and a touch rude when you’re not the commissioner.
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doomfister
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
The Power of Love - Given to a publicly verified artist with an image under their artist’s tag that has reached 1000 upvotes
Perfect Pony Plot Provider - Uploader of 10+ images with 350 upvotes or more (Questionable/Explicit)
Artist -

OFF HIS MEDS
@Background Pony #04A9
 
I will ask how so, as if its just because its oral vore, that’s just how the comic is going.
 
In regards to the time between pages, that is just the speed in which mrleft completes them, and i am happy with the pace, as it means nothing is rushed :)
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doomfister
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
The Power of Love - Given to a publicly verified artist with an image under their artist’s tag that has reached 1000 upvotes
Perfect Pony Plot Provider - Uploader of 10+ images with 350 upvotes or more (Questionable/Explicit)
Artist -

OFF HIS MEDS
@Background Pony #2EA4  
Just your imagination bud, 13 of the pages are vore, with only 7 being fluff, which was mostly just setting up the next 4 swallowing. The silverstream has been a slow start, so its probably just that tinting your perspective, as so far as previously stated there is quite a bit of variety in the interaction, and its going to get more varied as we edge into the end game.
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Background Pony #2EA4
@Background Pony #04A9  
Same- the girls go down so easy and beside the 1st and 2nd ones it’s just oral vore after all. I know you can only swallow whole a pony in so many ways but you got magic to help in making it more interesting. Some different reactions or focus on different perspectives would also be good.
 
We are 20 pages in and it just feels like 15 of them were setup for maybe 5 pages of vore(when we still can see some of the prey) with like 8 panels of “action”. :(
 
 
Ok maybe I’m exaggerating it but it do feel like that. The stories do help tho.
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doomfister
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Lunar Supporter - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
The Power of Love - Given to a publicly verified artist with an image under their artist’s tag that has reached 1000 upvotes
Perfect Pony Plot Provider - Uploader of 10+ images with 350 upvotes or more (Questionable/Explicit)
Artist -

OFF HIS MEDS
@Background Pony #2EA4  
how so, we have had a environment kill, a double feeding and this one was a mistaken grab and gulp with a slow correction for the true passing partaking. The next three swallowing are also going to be different, so i am not sure where your complaint is coming from as the fluff present is foreshadowing and setting up the other parts.
 
 
@TheRedD20  
I am glad your enjoying it, we are about two thirds of the way through now and the spicey swallowing and end game will follow in due time :)
 
 
@Background Pony #04A9  
Your not to far off what is planned ;)
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Background Pony #2EA4
Its getting a little bit boring… it progressed to slowly and the actual vore parts are short and super repetitive… and I’m talking both story and comic.
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Background Pony #04A9
Pinkie should be like “Ooh! Me next, and I’m gonna make out with Bifrost in your tummy!”
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