@Background Pony #B10F
I forget these comments don’t let you make new paragraphs! As I was saying, I do like the idea of this design. I prefer Chryssy with a swarthier complexion, it flatters her colors better. You have a good eye for color. I’m particularly enamored with the sleeveless top you gave her, especially the frills around the collar. It’s a nice change of pace from most human-Chryssy art I’ve seen, where they either give her a jacket, or put her in a sexy enchantress gown with ridiculously oversized cleavage. I look forward to seeing you improve as an artist!

Hmm. The art is a bit crude, and her arms look like they’ve been switched—I’m confident the wrists shouldn’t prone like that. Her left leg looks like it’s coming out of her right knee, or that she has a second joint between her thigh and knee to twist it up like that. You should definitely consider reviewing and practicing anatomical drawing.

 That said, I do like the idea of this design, however.  I honestly prefer human-Chrysalis with a swarthier complexion, because it suits her colors better. The sleeveless top is a good design; I’m particularly enamored with the frills around the collar.  It’s a nice change of pace from most human-Chryssy designs that give her a dark jacket, or put her in a sexy enchantress gown.  You have a good eye for color, and that seems to be your biggest strength as an artist.  I look forward to seeing you improve!