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Champions of Equestria

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@Typewriterpony  
Since an Unfortunate Baking Accident(R) would fit her backstory all too well, I’m all for Strudel-Face Spetsnazmena.
 
Eerie cosmic coincidence: Spike & Rares’ VAs also dubbed the Lovelace kid & his rabid attack maid. Might be just as well this ain’t a full-bore plug & play.
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@Typewriterpony  
So long as you’re watching their antics through the 4th wall, sure. Speaking of which, I may not wanna even know what this ’verse has made of the Pie.
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@The Neutrino  
Nor, for that matter, is madness remotely limited by such arbitrary categories as gender or appearance. Peeps just give ‘their’ type (whatever it may be) more slack in calling it out.
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@theffb  
No shit. Pinheads expecting one-for-one character/scenario analogues between a fanwork and one inspirational source…urgh.
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@Ertinax  
your attempt failed. A style of drawing is a style, pia-sama’s isn’t a realistic style. About the outfits, almost every series has outfits that aren’t fitting the situation, but more the character that wears it.
theffb

@LuminoZero  
and thank you for that, someone every single page makes that damn comic. So best to just get it out of the way.
 
Hey guys, remember that time in Black Lagoon when Dutch was worried about getting blood on his shoes? That was a great episode!
 
Wait a minute, that didn’t happen? BLASPHEMY!!
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@Ertinax  
For the record, Pia usually draws Rarity with a bigger bust, so that’s why it might feel a little disproportionate.
Ertinax

Attempt at productive criticism:
 
The lineart is very crisp, the detail is good, and Spike’s model continues to fit fine. But I think the proportions on the girls may be a little off. It was less jarring with Celestia, because, well, top-heavy-Celly, but with RD and Rarity it just feels like they could be reduced a bit around the hips, at least. It would give it a more natural feel when they’re doing athletic jumps and being more pirates than runway models. If that makes sense. Of course, one’s tastes are entirely subjective.
 
I also find canon-age-Sparity to be very offputting, but you’ve mostly mitigated that with the timeskip. So that’s a positive, too. I don’t want to give the impression of being entirely negative.