@Azure Blackstone
Oh, sure. The sex scene itself was lovely, and I did like some of the interactions. But a combination of questionable logic and Cadance acting like a selfish, foal-obsessed cow at the beginning just turned me off.
“Oh dear. I suppose that means we’re going with adoption?”
“Pfft, that’s for wimps. We’re gonna turn you into a mare and have you carry our kids instead!”
“Um… what?”
“I’m going to bring my male self back from a century in the future after the curse on me has worn off, then I’ll turn you into a mare and get him to impregnate you! That seems like the most logical course of action to me.”
“Cadance, I don’t think that this~~”
“Shining, I want foals.”
“But~~”
“Right. Now.”
“But surely there’s a better way of~~”
“SHUT UP AND MAKE WITH THE GENDER-BENDING.”
“We’re not even going to consider adoption? Or surrogacy?”
Just like my pets!
Oh yes, and the author calling perfectly valid criticism ‘saltiness’ did nothing to endear me towards it, either.
Oh, sure. The sex scene itself was lovely, and I did like some of the interactions. But a combination of questionable logic and Cadance acting like a selfish, foal-obsessed cow at the beginning just turned me off.
Bah, it’s still a lovely story.
Were any of them as needlessly convoluted and contrived as this one?
Having Shining become preggers is not even an original idea. There’s like 3 or 4 other stories that do nearly the exact same thing.
“Shining, I have bad news – I’m infertile.”
“Oh dear. I suppose that means we’re going with adoption?”
“Pfft, that’s for wimps. We’re gonna turn you into a mare and have you carry our kids instead!”
“Um… what?”
“I’m going to bring my male self back from a century in the future after the curse on me has worn off, then I’ll turn you into a mare and get him to impregnate you! That seems like the most logical course of action to me.”
“Cadance, I don’t think that this~~”
“Shining, I want foals.”
“But~~”
“Right. Now.”
“But surely there’s a better way of~~”
“SHUT UP AND MAKE WITH THE GENDER-BENDING.”
“We’re not even going to consider adoption? Or surrogacy?”
“No.”
“But~~”
“NO.”
That blog’s been dead for years.