Laugh Because your grammar is horrible, your plotlines are not interesting and you seem to have only done this because someone decided to make you sad!
Torch: Tears up I…I don’t understand…
Laugh Basically, your fanfic’s shit and needs to go back to the drawing board!
Edited
Torch: WHY IS THAT THEN!?
Laugh Because your grammar is horrible, your plotlines are not interesting and you seem to have only done this because someone decided to make you sad!
Torch: Tears up I…I don’t understand…
Laugh Basically, your fanfic’s shit and needs to go back to the drawing board!
Que critic being charred to ashes moments later…
I can’t be sad, because this just killed me x.x
hngh
Stupid Dragon Lord Torch, and his stupid commands I have to follow.