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You follow Max “Excuse me, Maximilian?”
 
“Yes Sunny?”
 
“Could I perhaps sleep with you again tonight?”
 
“I don’t want you to be tired tomorrow. I’m not sure we should…”
 
“Just sleeping! I Know what happened last night was… sudden. But I would really appreciate being near someone I care about.”
 
“I really should check on my home… Fine. I’ll get a blanket this time.”
 
You meet in the same room you slept in last night and the two of you lay on some hay.
 
“Max, if Unicorns can use powerful magic why haven’t they won the war?”
 
“Unicorns like all ponies, griffins, anything, can make mistakes. I’m a very good example of that. Cunning is something more important in any battle than powerful magic.”
 
“I bet you can’t outcuddle me Max!” You embrace him and tightly hug Maximilian under the covers.
 
He smiles, “I guess I’m no match. Good night sunny.”
 
“Good night Max.” You give him a quick little kiss.
 
That night you dream of a village being attacked by a dragon. You never seen a dream this detailed. No matter what you do You’re not able to help any of the ponies in this town. They cannot see or hear you. you wander through the destruction able to smell the burned flesh and houses. You wander into the field nearby to escape the chaos.
 
You hear Loom’s voice, “You’re not supposed to see this”.
 
You turn and there Loom is. You open you mouth to ask her what’s going on, but you cannot speak. Loom jumps on top of you and begins to push her hooves into your windpipe. You are gasping for air as the Mare chokes the life from you. “You cannot change your stars. You are not allowed.”
 
You stare pleadingly into Loom’s eyes as she continues choking you. Your vision goes dark as you hear the snap of you own crushed windpipe.
 
You wake up in a cold sweat next to Max who is sound asleep. You go back to sleep yourself.
 
End of Chapter 3!
 
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