King sombra returns to attack canterlot high.
He possesses Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie pie threatens to kill all of her friends.
Rainbow dash lazer torture
Applejack about to drown
Rarity with human male
Fluttershy about to be burned alive
Sunset Shimmer calls twilight
Twilight goes to the canterlot high!
When she enters the portal, She sees chaos!!!
Her and spike find sunset shimmer!
Sunset shimmer: Please twilight! help! Pinkie pie is posseseed by some dark magic!
Twilight: i know! that’s king sombra!
Sunset: did he attack your world once?
Twilight: Yes. he did. he attacked the crystal empire!!!
Sunset: oh yeah! i heard about him when he attacked the crystal empire when i was in equestria! how in the world was he ressurected in hopes of destroying canterlot high?
Twilight: i don’t know. but all we do know is, we gotta get pinkie pie back on our side!
Sunset: i know. C’mon! follow me!! we gotta save our friends!
Twilight: what’s been happening so far?
Sunset: everything was peaceful until that “dark magical freak” appeared!
Twilight: how have you been getting along with that duplicate of me?
Sunset: i’ve been getting along great! she said she’d love to meet you!
Twilight: so where is she?
Sunset: Safe at home.
Twilight: phew.
Sci-twi: HELP ME!!!
Sunset: was that you?
Twilight: no
Sunset: oh no! that must have been the duplicate you!!!
Twilight: oh no…
Sci-twi: you’ll never get away with this whoever you are!!!!!!!!!
King sombra: but i will….when I TURN THIS PLACE INTO MY CITY!!! YOU WILL ALL BE MY SLAVES!!!!
Twilight: where is pinkie pie?
Sunset: at a fort…
Twilight: which one?
Sunset: oh yeah! she might be, AT THE SUGAR CUBE CORNER!!!
Twilight: where’s mrs cake and ms cake?
Sunset: Dead.
Twilight: gasp
Sunset: Anyways, just follow me!
Twilight: let’s go in!
Sunset: no, we have to watch what’s she’s planning!
Pinkie: haha, when i turn my friends into cupcakes, they will be so cute!!!
Rainbow: HELP MEE!!!
Jack: I’M DROWNING!!!
Rarity: get this rude pig off me!!!
Fluttershy: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!
Twilight: c’mon!!!
Sunset: We Have No Choice. Let’s go in and free our friends!
Rainbow dash: sunset shimmer! twilight! what are you guys doing here?
Sunset Shimmer: No time to explain! we have to free you!
Rainbow dash: thank you so much!!
Twilight: we have to free the others!
Applejack: IT’S ABOUT TO FILLL!!!!!
Sunset: HANG IN THERE JACK!!!
Applejack: sunset?
Sunset: come on applejack! we’ve gotta free the others!
sunset kills male with bazooka
Rarity is free!
sunset cuts the rope
rainbow frees fluttershy
Fluttershy: oh gosh! thank you guys!!
Sunset: come on guys! we must cleanse our friend of this dark magic!
Pinkie: i hope my friends are dead already!
All: Not for long!!!
Pinkie: OH MY GOD! HOW DID YOU ESCAPE MY TRAP?
Rainbow: thanks to sunset shimmer and twilight!
Pinkie: SUNSET SHIMMER! I HAVE A TRAP JUST WAITING FOR YOU!!!!!!!!
Sunset: GET HER!!!!!!
Twilight: HOLD HER DOWN!!
Pinkie: what are you doing!!!
Sunset: freeing you!
Pinkie: UGH! GET OFF ME YOU DUMB BIT-
Twilight: Hold your lips down! i don’t want to hear that at all!
Pinkie: AAH!!!
Rainbow: I think we got her!
Pinkie: where, am i….what happened…..
Twilight: you were possesed by king sombra!
Pinkie: king who-to-the-what-now?
Sunset: No time to explain. we gotta defeat king sombra!
King sombra: Slaves…Bow to me….
Rainbow: Surrender King Butthead!
King Sombra: WHAT? PINKIE HOW YOU FREE FROM CURSE?
Pinkie: i owe it all to my best friends!
King Sombra: spare me your dumb freindship crap!!
Twilight: EVERYONE UNLEASH YOUR WEAPONS!!!
Loyality Sword!
Honesty Sword!
Generousity Sword!
Laughter Sword!
Kindness Sword!
Faith Sword!
Magic Sword!!!
mane 7 unleash rainbowfied powers
Sombra: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
All: YEAH!!!!!!
Sunset: we did it! and look!
Sci-twi: huh?
Twilight: it’s you! the duplicate!
Sci-twi: you look just like me!
Sci-twi and Twilight: hahaha!
Cadence: i’m really proud of what you did back there!
Celestia: indeed. you have shown the full potential of the magic of friendship. and so did you sunset.
People: i think we should forgive you sunset! you aren’t a bad girl after all!
Twilight: i also gotta go back to equestria. everyone may need me now that i am the princess of friendship.
All: SO LONG PRINCESS TWILIGHT! SEE YOU NEXT TIME!
THE END
who was the backround pony? and what did he say?
Edited
I’m going to give you one chance to stop adding tags like that, and to stop making comments like that.
Legitimate criticism is fine. Baseless criticism, insults, tag vandalism, etc, will earn you a hefty ban.
and if so, what was your favorite part?
Edited
Just keep practicing and I’m sure your art will get better and will be better received.
I can see that.
i don’t mean to i’m just so “asky wasky”
You uh, ask a lot of questions.
No need to be sorry, and don’t think like that.
yeah. i am terrible.
sorry.
Not to be a downer, but you have noticed that some people don’t necessarily like your other artwork, right?