@Background Pony #F172  
Relax, it’s not an issue.

@Background Pony #7A3E  
Oh well I’m new here so piss off

@Background Pony #F172  
Click on his name and go to “send message”. Not that hard

@TheRedKing  
lol it’s ok. How do I Pm?

@Background Pony #F172  
Feel free to PM me if you’re really interested. I’m not one for dumping a wall of text here. Why are you so curious? Kind of choose the worst picture to ask, so apologies if I seem a little less than skeptical.

@TheRedKing  
I would love to her this characters story. Got a moment to explain it, his strong and weak points, and why he likes celestial?

@Oktober Blitz  
Actually it’s mine. And No, the BG is right. This was actually commissioned over two years ago before I did anything else. I had forgotten it all that time, and when it was finally presented to me I had pretty much regretted the whole thing. I didn’t really want it posted as it doesn’t do the actual character justice in any way, and was actually kind of a spur of the moment thing at the time. If I honestly could have, I would have changed a ton of it, but in all honesty you should look at it as a silly thing that was probably best forgotten, and not what he actually is.
 
But as the BG stated, you likely know nothing of what he is or so on. He’s got flaws and the like. He’s no where near the perfect person despite the harem pic. I might just request it to be taken down if I can get in contact with the artist on of these days. It was a decision of a stupid man from two years ago that should have honestly kept tabs on his shit. Very few actually know anything about him and that’s all that matters, as those that know are actual friends. But I do want outside critic that is above “This OC is bad”. If you want to actually know what he’s about or whatever, message me, and I’ll be happy to share and take critic so long as it’s actually constructive. Don’t let this one pic get to you. Even I hardly like it.
 
I don’t care to much about what “some people” might dislike, as most of them just hate it for the sake of hating, and others is due to god knows whatever. They claim to know what it’s about but don’t have a single thing to show for it other than a picture that has no actual context on anything. So no, it’s fine. Those that defend it, more power to them I appreciate it, those are people that aren’t gonna scream “gary stu” or whatever without some form of actual proof on the character.
 
But yea. You want to sate your curiosity? Go for it, PM me, I’ll gladly be waiting.

@Background Pony #7A3E  
check the post dates. this was posted here to Derpibooru 3 months ago. and Deviantart says it was posted this year but doesn’t give me an exact month most of the comments are from September which leads me to believe the 3 months old post date a lot more then your 2 years ago story.
 
plus you have a lot of comments defending this post which makes me believe you are the owner of Claymore the oc.
 
I’m sorry if my comment offended you I was only trying to help you understand why some people dislike your oc and why it could be written better with some more time and effort

@Oktober Blitz  
Pretty sure the guy said this was something from like 2 years ago that he really wished he could change. But it’s nice that people talk about stuff they don’t even know. But what do I know? I just like seeing people bitch about OCs they know nothing about, or don’t know how to have fun with something.

see this is the problem A lot of people run into when writing OC’s. they don’t want to make them flawed cause in the mind of an inexperienced or untrained writer a flawed charter is a bad charter. Flaws and weaknesses enhance charter give them a weakness. IE: Fluttershy is shy, Applejack is overly headstrong,Captain Ahab is driven to madness by his lust for revenge.
 
but this is just an overly sexualized self insert that really makes the creator look like a low level egomaniac because the creator just whats some cheap wish fulfillment

@Background Pony #CBB7  
Jaden:who’s the hottest guy in town? Up in here, up in here!
 
I’m the hottest guy in town! Up in here, up in here!

Pegasus voice
 
Well hello there, Jaden-Boy!

Almost that that was Jaden Yuki there. Boy is thst egg on my face

@Background Pony #D0D6  
The OC has a name and a tag. Instead of crapping up the comments, add it to your filter.

@Background Pony #7A3E  
Isn’t it kind of hypocritical to slam someone for making an anonymous comment, in an anonymous comment? If you’re Clayton (which you probably are), why not just own up to it? Anyway, I don’t need the shelter of anonymity to say I find this picture to be in extremely poor taste. It’s the sexual form of a Mary Sue story, random new person comes in, suddenly the world, story, and characters belong to them? The Princess of Equestria decides she wants to be his concubine, FFS? He can do what he wants obviously, but in my opinion, even for canon x oc this is extremely cringey. Bonus points for the random League character thrown in, too.

@Background Pony #D0D6  
To think you know anything at all. Just another jealous anon? Or maybe someone salty they can’t afford their own. At least Derpi is never short of someone who’s got their panties in a knot and wants to hide.

To think this guy actively tried to claim he wasn’t a self-insert.

Thought Riven was Gilda for a moment.
 
This guy must be a vampire or something to have all those hotties wrapped around his finger.

God damn lucky bastard!