(Whoops, the topkek’s not shining. Wait, you shouldn’t have a combo on the ground? What are you talking about?)
Glad to have this lined. I’m not sure about color and such, though the process is usually much faster than lining. Oh well; ‘hope you enjoy this much, at least! Comic things take forever, especially at my pace, yeesh.
(I’m sure you can figure the panel order!)
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Hey, thanks a bunch! This is definitely much more preferable. No need to fix what isn’t broken, though! I’ll just update the description.
@hype
Rule 34.2, with a hint of nostalgia.
what in the good golly are you smoking sus
Here’s a quick edit to stack the panels like a regular comic. You could probably make a neater version than I did in MS Paint though.
Yeah, that probably could’ve helped a lot in this sequence. I assume way too easily that others will pick up my mindset with my stuff, so I’d better be more logical in my future things. Thanks, though!
You could also have tried making the vertical gutters between the three sections significantly thicker, so that the image would scan more as three side-by-side ‘pages’ to most people’s eyes. That would lead them naturally to read each section correctly - as it is the whole image scans as one ‘page’ so the immediate instinct is to go completely from one side to the other before dropping down.
@LemonDrop
Derp. I missed the joke. Wups.
@Background Pony #4783
@LemonDrop
Yeah, ’was considering putting them in the corners of the panels or in the least the description.
[ 1 ] [ 5 ] [ 9 ]
[2|3][ 6 ] [10|11]
[ 4 ] [7|8][12]
Apologies for that!
I know, was just expressing how confusing it is to read without any indication, especially how the vore stuff in this comic is half backwards too which just makes figuring out which way things are going all the more difficult
Start at the top left and work down, then the top middle and down, then top right.
It’s not really a great layout for a single image comic…