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@Adequality
This. It’s usually not found outside of manga (even some translated versions are still printed right-to-left) and works produced in the Middle East, where the local tongue is read and written right-to-left.
When it comes to Western comics the common rule for text bubbles are as follows: readers will read left to right and top to bottom.
Which means that Sweetie bell’s text bubble should be on the upper left, not bottom right… She is not speaking first in this comic, she’s always second, by common western comic rules…
Besides that no problems with this comic, good job.
That’s not all she probably wants. She probably also wants to squish his buttcheeks.
Edited because: Rule #7: Suggestive
Edited
Also would that even work? Is Sweetie Belle even a qualified medical professional?
Edited because: Rule #7: Suggestive
Though I will say that top -> bottom takes precedence over left -> right
So if you just put sweeties text at top and buttons on bottom then you wouldn’t have to change the left/right positions
I was gonna say this too, I also read them in the wrong order.
This. It’s usually not found outside of manga (even some translated versions are still printed right-to-left) and works produced in the Middle East, where the local tongue is read and written right-to-left.
Which means that Sweetie bell’s text bubble should be on the upper left, not bottom right… She is not speaking first in this comic, she’s always second, by common western comic rules…
Besides that no problems with this comic, good job.