It wasn’t long before the first cave dweller appeared before us. A hulking monstrosity of ever-shifting dark crystal, it bore an uncanny resemblance to an adventurer we’ve met only weeks ago in a tavern. Back then, he had told us of the strange allure of the crystal caves; the whispers in his dreams, and his yearning to explore them in hopes of finding someone once dear to him. Even now, his shambling crystalline form seemed to wear the same vacant smile as he slowly approached us. We were petrified, unable to act as he - no, as it came closer. The spell was broken when it attacked, surprisingly nimble despite its rock-hard appendages.
I will not lie, and say I stood my ground and fought. There is no shame is fleeing such… thing, so alien, yet so familiar. Our party separated, the screams of my companions echoing through the caverns behind me. I ran, blinded by tears, mumbling madly. I would have fallen prey to the first beast to happen upon me were it not for my brother. Perhaps he had kept more of his wits about him, or he simply fled in the same direction; in either case, he was beside me when we were attacked. The crab-like, crystalline spiders seemed almost normal compared to what we have left behind us - we fought, and the adrenaline helped somewhat to anchor the last vestiges of my slipping sanity. And yet, with each hit, scratch, bash, and spell, I felt the gem I carried growing weaker, until -
I cannot say more.
Is it not obvious, seeing me here, with the rest gone, that I’ve proven a coward twice in a single day? Could you in all confidence say you would not do the same?
I have survived the ordeal, and found my way back home, even though I am not sure how. I wish never to return to those strange, twisting caverns… and yet…
…and yet each night, I hear the voice whispering just beyond the threshold of recognition. In my dreams, I glance a familiar figure, beckoning, and I know I will return, and will be with my brother again.”
Thanks. I enjoy some DD, even if I couldn’t really make the picture as dark and oppressive as the game is.
@Minus
Despite sounding like a cool gimmick, I think motion comics aren’t the best way to go. If you put multiple panels on a page, the motion creates a lot of visual clutter. Synchronizing action with text is a lot of pain, too, since people read at different speeds. You could do a single animation at a time with text available on user input, but that’s basically a “dynamic novel” or whatever they call dating sims with no branches these days. In the end, putting in that much effort, you might as well just go the extra step, and make it an animation.
Alternatively - an idea I often toy with - is to have a couple of mood-setting animations (like the cinemagraphs I make) peppered around some larger written work, like a short story. That way, you can highlight key scenes, keep a good quality of animation, and still be able to put in all the descriptions and dialogue that might feel like a wall of text in a comic.
@Blissey1
What can I say? Best game is best.
BUT NOT THIS ONE!
NOT TODAY!
Also I spent way too long trying to find the spot where it loops, and I can’t. This is really well made!