@hgdb  
Hah, thanks. A comment like that is pretty awesome to come by. I may not have been as productive as I wanted to be today, but you know what? That’s all I need. If I made someone else experience something so good it’s “surreal”, then that’s a productive day.

@Twilights-Secret
 
This is crazy, I’ve gone from nobody talking about my art to, paragraphs of critique. Thank you so much it means a lot to me! Where do I even start?
 
Yep, I made her face different in many way just based on how I usually draw my characters. There’s a lot of things that are ever so slightly different but, in general her face is a wider. I don’t use vectors to much, maybe I’ll reference another artist sometimes.
 
Your tips are very helpful I’ll definitely be using them in future projects, especially that stuff about the thickness of the padding. And you made a picture?! Dude you’re amazing, thank you again. I actually used that gallery you linked for references so, thanks for that too.
 
Thanks for all your feedback and your kind words! It’s kinda surreal getting so much at once.

@hgdb  
Possibly the snout and mouth?
 
Looks alright, but there’s some very tiny, vague departure from show-style. Hard to figure out exactly what it is. Fwiw, usually when I vector something I find a reference and use it heavily to get everything right. A little searching and I found something with Twilight’s head at the same angle. >>1586992
 
Anyways, as for the stuff I was going to mention; I did it:
 

 
To make the diaper look plush and thick/padded, typically it looks better if it’s rounded a bit. The dotted lines show some possibilities - usually when I’m making a diaperpony vector I toy around a lot with different possibilities and tweak it a lot to try to get it to look right.
 
In that little box to the left I recreated the creases/folds of the diaper to show how they’re all kind of evenly spaced. Usually I think they look a bit better if they’re not spaced so evenly? (On the viewer-right/Twilight’s-left side of the diaper I toyed around with drawing some unevenly spaced creases)
 
It’s hard to say for sure, though. All I can say for sure is to suggest doing what I do; study a lot of diapers very carefully - particularly your favorite ones done in a similar style to what you can do, and carefully note how to recreate what you like about them. Here’s my gallery of top diaperpones.
 
But given this is your first diaperpony drawing, I think you already have studied some diapers a good bit, heh.
 
I particularly love how you can see it go around her back and how it seems to rise in the back a bit, with that big top loose part like a lip or a sleeve on the top of the diaper - it just makes it look so snug and comfy!

@Background Pony #F08E
 
How so?

This drawing feels weird.

@hgdb  
I hope I don’t keep forgetting to do this, but I was on my phone then, and am again, now, so…

@thunderchaser22  
Thanks for the feedback!  
Nitpicks are very important to me because with something like this it’s important to get those details right.

Really love this dude! A couple of things though, the diaper could be a little wider in the crotch area or at least more puffy. The wings of the diaper (That’s what the tapes are attached too) should be a little wider, same with the tapes themselves. That’s about all I can see and those are really just minor nitpicks!

This actually looks really good!  
And Twily’s such a cutie…

@Twilights-Secret  
Thank you so much, really. You’re the first person ever to actually notice a detail I’ve made with an artistic purpose and for that you get a gold star.  
Please tell me all of your critisism, especially with the diaper. It’s a lot harder to draw than I thought it would be.  
I haven’t actually drawn to many ponies in my life, maybe five. I was always too afraid of people seeing. But, I have been studying them, all the different styles people use. It facinates me how people can really make these ponies their own.

Ooh, amazing.
 
Hmm… I have some constructive criticisms, though not sure how to say them without just redlining it…
 
Not a lot, though. Maybe just something about the general shape of one of the lines on the diaper. Perhaps the line on the left, but only below the landing zone bowing outwards a bit to give the impression of a plushy diaper.
 
It’s really good, though, and you’ve definitely drawn a lot of ponies before to draw them this well, especially at this angle. Fantastic idea on the angle, too. I’m a bit jealous I didn’t think of it, hah. The way she’s leaning forward and how she’s on one fronthoof just positioned so as to not block the view of the diaper…

@hgdb  
mhm~

@Mike  
yes please

@Mike  
thanks!

@hgdb  
I can delete it for you.

@hgdb  
Just testing the links. How do you delete comments?

Not bad for a first effort, not at all ^^

Very cute