Ruby sword in swim trunks: nosebleed

@Chuy Ryu  
Well since you’ve gotten better at drawing, I think now is the good time to redo it.

@Shimmering Spectacle  
yes, Im pretty ashamed of this garbage

@Chuy Ryu  
Are you really?

@FireWing  
well, even then, I was thinking in redraw this

@Chuy Ryu  
Should make them Ask nicely instead of them Demanding

@Background Pony #AAC6  
I’ll do a redraw of this shit with a nude version of course… but not yet

make a nude version of this pls <3

Better than anything I could ever Attempt

@wolfnanaki  
thanks

Pretty good for a first attempt. Definitely looking forward to more from you!

@RushCars24  
thanks, I will try

Well done for a first-timer drawing, thought the head should be bigger, but she’s so hot!

@Nayaase Beleguii  
actually thanks, I like your work and that’s why I’ll take your advices

Hey there man, A couple of observations, please don’t take it personally or as an attack, because i can see lots of potential in your art if you polish it more  
First of all, the positive  
You clearly had the idea of what to draw and kudos to you but sadly there’s a lot of stuff anatomy wise that needs improvement  
-Heat too small plus long neck  
-One shoulder is too large while the other is too short  
-Left arm is too large, and the right one is too short  
-The armpit doesn’t connect naturally to the rest of her body  
-Those breasts look like tumors that are popping out on her abnormally large thorax  
-There’s a very unnatural curve from the waist to the hips, doesn’t flow well with the rest of the body, and makes her pose look rigid as hell  
-The left leg doesn’t have a normal positioning in regards of the hip, makes it look disjointed  
 
Again, please don’t take it personally, there are a lot of things you can still improve  
It might be sounds like a meme, but really, hit Loomis, it really helps a lot

Good choice of subject.
 
It came out great.

the head should be a bit bigger but overall this is nice

It doesn’t suck. The body is fine but the head could be bigger.

Wow! What a babe! 💘💘💘💘💘

@FourShadow  
@Background Pony #DAD7  
thanks
 
@FourShadow  
I still need to practice more with the tablet… but I hope make it better…

Dude, I think the art is fine. Not bad for a first pic