Put ze pony down, Spits!

@Billystorm  
True tho it was just full of smut scenes, you can maybe add some action into it?@Exelzior

@Exelzior  
Actually that’s pretty much what it is. I like the story but I think for a quick clop it’s dragged out too long, you know for a 30K word story we want more than just mindless sex. But people who stick to it might want only sex anyways, might as well go sexy all the way I guess.

@vinviasshine  
Been thinking the same thing for years now, but like I said, I have no idea how to make any of it work.

@Exelzior  
Oh I read that it was going great tho, you should finish that chapter xD

@vinviasshine  
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/120123/unprofessional
 
There it is, enjoy what little exists. Haven’t updated it in 4-5 years, though I do have a half finished chapter sitting in my Gdocs somewhere.

@Exelzior  
Wait, did you deleted it or something? If u didn’t I must know it.  
what’s it’s namee

@Billystorm  
Yeah, I do too, unfortunately it’s effectively stuck in development hell (read, my brain) until I can get my thumbs outta my ass and actually get on it again. I just don’t know how I’d go about finishing it in a proper way, an however I look at it, the most I can see is more or less just a series of vinjettes with some weird semblence of a thread going through them all, and I don’t know if people would want that or if I’d be up to the task to write it.

Aww cuties

@Exelzior  
I miss your soarinfire story…

Baby Soarin:Angry Neigh

@OtherFritz  
Just assume a few of her fingers are covered by Soarin’s fluff.

Soarin’s such a cute little thing here.
 
That being said, Spitfire’s face seems a bit off to me. Hard to put it into words.  
Also, are her hands supposed to have so few fingers?

Hisssss

Aww she still likes him, even as a horse!

We need more human Spitfire!