Will Nightmare Moon ever manage to fix this timeline? Will the guard take swig of Yakyakistani wine to ease his nerves? Will Nightmare Moon find the brats who were supposed to destroy her?
Who knows! Not me, because I’m done with this arc saga thing.
@Apex Soundwave
Maybe not. My main problem is dialogue, I really have a difficult time writing it. That other guy in the comments wrote a far better thing than anything I could’ve come up with.
“We need five teenagers with attitude.”
“What?”
“Sorry, this stuff hits you harder than the yaks that brew it. I meant six virtuous ponies. And possibly a dragon. I’m definitely getting a sense that a dragon is involved somehow.”
“I think you’ve had enough, Your Highness.”
“I’ve had one sip.”
“And I think that’s enough.”
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“We need five teenagers with attitude.”
“What?”
“Sorry, this stuff hits you harder than the yaks that brew it. I meant six virtuous ponies. And possibly a dragon. I’m definitely getting a sense that a dragon is involved somehow.”
“I think you’ve had enough, Your Highness.”
“I’ve had one sip.”
“And I think that’s enough.”
To be fair, FOME does right good stuff.
Hmmmmmmmmm
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Maybe ask around on derpi for a co-op or ask your friends for some ideas??
Maybe not. My main problem is dialogue, I really have a difficult time writing it. That other guy in the comments wrote a far better thing than anything I could’ve come up with.
Wish there was an option to pin comments on this site
“What?”
“Sorry, this stuff hits you harder than the yaks that brew it. I meant six virtuous ponies. And possibly a dragon. I’m definitely getting a sense that a dragon is involved somehow.”
“I think you’ve had enough, Your Highness.”
“I’ve had one sip.”
“And I think that’s enough.”