you get a lot right where others fail verminshy
 
your technique in drawing the ponies is quite good  
but you really need to practice a lot more  
you need to refine those strokes
 
technically your great  
but you need to make those lines a little tighter  
it’s something your hand will learn with enough drawing lines over and over
 
don’t worry if it’s not perfect  
nobody’s perfect and even the best artists start from somewhere  
(they just tend to delete their old work so nobody knows how bad they were)
 
you draw a bit like my sister  
i’d like to see you experiment a bit more with background or character design  
i don’t think you have to stick so rigidly to what you’re used to

I know that feel, seriously.

Not even your creator?

Don’t say that, someone will always care.

spoiled brat bitch lol