This dude is probably never gonna read this, but fuck it! He needs to read this…
 
For 1) PLEASE work better on your shading and shadows. Your art makes it look like those old 1980’s kids learning programs in which there’s no fucking shadow to begin with under them.
 
2) Please for the love of God work on your anatomy. That’s probably saying something for me with my anatomy, but at least my anatomy did look like a boot leg rip-off of Total Drama Island. Which says something, if you’re basing your design off of Total Drama Island, MAKE IT AT LEAST GOOD LOOKING and try to at least look up tutorials on how to do the show’s style.
 
3) add movements. So far with most of your art it doesn’t show much movement no does it show any signs of being realistic in terms of drawing and cartoons.
 
If you want to have movement, shading is probably one of the most important things to add to have your drawings look more lively and have more depth and meaning behind them.
 
Back to the anatomy, if you’re gonna keep doing this Total Drama Island “anatomy”, STOP fucking making almost all your Characters including your Gary stu “oc” have Feminine fucking hips. Anatomy is also a very, VERY IMPORTANT ASPECT of making drawings look good. Sure feminine looking styles look good, but that’s only for some cases. It’s not for all pieces of art, and you have to understand that.
 
 
I also have some criticism for your OC, if you want your art and characters to be liked I suggest start revising your character plus his god damn unoriginal name. SERIOUSLY?? Stewie Gary? That’s blatantly showing everyone that your OC is a good for nothing Gary stu and it shows in your shop arts you do.
 
If you want to make an OC, have a name that’s original and can be well liked and agreed upon, having an unoriginal name will lead to people not liking your character and if your unoriginal and unfunny parodies aren’t well received then it’s time you should be going back to the drawing board and rethinking what would make good character names and thus parody names.
 
I highly doubt you’ll give this a look, but this is probably the only way your art PLUS your ships can be well received. I rest my case:
 
CASE.FUCKING.CLOSED. 💨

That was fas

I have seen murder victims who look like they’re in less pain