Background Pony #AE00
- You need a proofreader badly. If you are not fluent in English, that would explain the mistakes, but stuff like “what have you done?” when it should be “what did you do?” is pretty jarring. Also, “BECAUSE” was consistently misspelled as “BECOUSE”.
- “I know that no one is alone because I used to be alone and now I’m not.” WTF is this nonsense. “No one is alone when we are together” Okay thanks for the tautology.