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one of my first pics, any constructive criticism is encouraged, anything to help me improve thanks!

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Bobarella
Since the Beginning  -

I agree along the lines of what Pomf said. Also, it wouldn’t hurt to move the wings up the back just a little bit, and maybe make the tail end bit a little smaller.
Psychopomf
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Out for a morning stretcH?
 
Oh and as far as critquing goes, make more sharp definate lines where you need to. And maybe work on making the wing structure look a little more ordered