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Starlight glimmer: screams and cries Oohhh… What the hoof was I thinking? I knew I should of said something but I didn’t…
Terramar: talons on starlight’s shoulders Starlight, look at me. I know you didn’t want both of them to never talk to you again but anypony makes mistakes, and I want to look for my sister too. Now stop crying and let’s keep looking for her. kisses cheek Alright, everypony let’s go! hugs starlight
Terramar here, thank you so much for reading this story gooeybird posting, and he sure to star and up them. See you in part 6 everypony.
Terramar: talons on starlight’s shoulders Starlight, look at me. I know you didn’t want both of them to never talk to you again but anypony makes mistakes, and I want to look for my sister too. Now stop crying and let’s keep looking for her. kisses cheek Alright, everypony let’s go! hugs starlight
Terramar here, thank you so much for reading this story gooeybird posting, and he sure to star and up them. See you in part 6 everypony.
Got it 👍
hey, you’ve got a long way to go from here. work on improving the art, writing, spelling, etc.
Gosh darn it…
you meant to hit reply under the cries comment
also, an asterisk (this thing -> *) after a word signifies a spelling correction
it’s spelled cries, not crys
also, that measely one paragraph of not story you call a story was bad.
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Seriously? Read the story!
anybody*
Edited
Read the story and you’ll get the idea of the photo.