Fucking stunning, slime! Glad to see you found my feedback useful! The eye, cheek, and horn changes definitely helped tighten up the piece. Great work, and Holy Shit on the coloring! You weren’t kidding when you said you were going to have fun with the lighting!!!
 
I think the ONLY thing that might be improved on is ear placement; If you look at her right ear, it’s placed just above and behind her eye, so to stay consistent her left ear should be around there on the opposite side. Here, her left ear is a bit too far back. I think it would probably either slightly in front of her horn, or placed just behind if you wanted to be more precise. Regardless, it’s a minor thing and you really blew this one out of the water!