I feel that sheltering Luster this much is the reason why she’s so socially stunted. You should have let her walk in on you while experimenting with the magic of love more often.
This is pretty inconsistent. Luster is old enough to know what’s behind the censorship in the kinky book but not behind the censorship of her parents in bed ?
The next strip is likely to continue with Luster talking to her parents so I think it feels off because the pacing feels off. Once full context is available it shouldn’t anymore.
@Dustcan
Feels more like this is a ‘cut-away’ to explain the last comment in the previous comment. This strip is funny on its own, but even more so with that context. It being told ‘out of order’ seems like the last panel of the previous comment was intended as a hook for this strip.
She’s too in denial to think about her parents having sex.
To quote the background pony on the comment section of page 31…
@Background Pony #E0A9
Feels more like this is a ‘cut-away’ to explain the last comment in the previous comment. This strip is funny on its own, but even more so with that context. It being told ‘out of order’ seems like the last panel of the previous comment was intended as a hook for this strip.
I mean, that’s kinda what I mean. Page 28 was the first mention of the censorship spell and Luster hates it. Okay so far.
Then page 31 has her appreciating the spell during her talk with Trixie. But we never see why she would have a 180 opinion on it.
And then this page happens right after 31 and shows us a reason for her change in opinion.
What I’m getting at is this running gag feels like it got told out of order.
Whichever direction, it’s still funny.
Context for having the previous page happen earlier:
no