Part twenty of my Collab with Mrleft ( https://derpibooru.org/profiles/Mr-dot-Left09 ). The other parts can be found here:
Part one: https://aryion.com/g4/view/583700
Part two:https://aryion.com/g4/view/584087
Part three: https://aryion.com/g4/view/587826
Part four: https://aryion.com/g4/view/588297
Part five: https://aryion.com/g4/view/591163
Part six: https://aryion.com/g4/view/594512
Part seven: https://aryion.com/g4/view/595135
Part eight: https://aryion.com/g4/view/601593
Part nine: https://aryion.com/g4/view/603009
Part ten: https://aryion.com/g4/view/605306
Part eleven: https://aryion.com/g4/view/607106
Part twelve: https://aryion.com/g4/view/611003
Part thirteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/615260
Part fourteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/615443
Part fifteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/619907
Part sixteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/622706
Part seventeen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/628417
Part eighteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/630521
Part nineteen: https://aryion.com/g4/view/633569
Part twenty: you are here
A story in the source as always, please do not repost it in the comments below :)
awe yeah XD
Give me some nice sweet horse pussy eating! XD
Oh I see.
this next section might take that a bit literally if you know what i mean ;)
I was agreeing with you, just surprised to see people backing me :)
You’re replying to the wrong guy. Never said anything bad about your work.
And this looks like it will be cotton candy ass. xD
@Background Pony #BCD0
this is the second time this week with people not happy with what i am posting, I don’t get it seeing as i don’t paywall and am rather prolific in both my commissions and trades/collabs.
@Background Pony #04A9
Do yourselves a favor and stop reading then instead of crying over how “repetitive” these are getting. More importantly, the artist or uploader never asked nor needed your opinion. Don’t like it? Leave. Simple.
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I will ask how so, as if its just because its oral vore, that’s just how the comic is going.
In regards to the time between pages, that is just the speed in which mrleft completes them, and i am happy with the pace, as it means nothing is rushed :)
Just your imagination bud, 13 of the pages are vore, with only 7 being fluff, which was mostly just setting up the next 4 swallowing. The silverstream has been a slow start, so its probably just that tinting your perspective, as so far as previously stated there is quite a bit of variety in the interaction, and its going to get more varied as we edge into the end game.
Same- the girls go down so easy and beside the 1st and 2nd ones it’s just oral vore after all. I know you can only swallow whole a pony in so many ways but you got magic to help in making it more interesting. Some different reactions or focus on different perspectives would also be good.
We are 20 pages in and it just feels like 15 of them were setup for maybe 5 pages of vore(when we still can see some of the prey) with like 8 panels of “action”. :(
Ok maybe I’m exaggerating it but it do feel like that. The stories do help tho.
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Honestly, it is kind of repetitive. The time between pages doesn’t help either.
Yes, Pinkie, that’s the plan!
how so, we have had a environment kill, a double feeding and this one was a mistaken grab and gulp with a slow correction for the true passing partaking. The next three swallowing are also going to be different, so i am not sure where your complaint is coming from as the fluff present is foreshadowing and setting up the other parts.
@TheRedD20
I am glad your enjoying it, we are about two thirds of the way through now and the spicey swallowing and end game will follow in due time :)
@Background Pony #04A9
Your not to far off what is planned ;)