@Mildgyth  
Don’t worry about it, I won’t be engaging with either of them anymore.

@Sprite  
@Paddy sparkle
 
They’ve got a point. quit it.

@Sprite  
I met, to stop the fighting in the comments. It’s overflowing with them.

@Small Brooke  
Fine. You won’t hear from me again. Best of luck as an artist.

@Sprite  
Um…Shut up! I would like all of this to stop!

@Small Brooke  
If you have a problem with me giving criticism, then come out and say it yourself. Don’t hide behind your white knight. They just want to pick fights instead of letting you deal with things yourself.

Ugh, you guys!! That’s enough!!!
 
And this is from both of you.

@Paddy sparkle  
What the hell are you on about, dude? I’ve given her… Three bits of criticism in the entire time she’s been an artist. Once on FA, and twice on here. If that is “too much” then both of you need to re-evaluate your stances on things. If what I said is “negative criticism” then you need to actually stop posting, get out into the world, and learn what constructive criticism really is.

@Sprite  
all i ask can give them lil break on criticism. it very nice give her criticism, but it lil too much they need more positive and less negative criticism. they being improving they style it just get to point which all veiw negative feed back.

@Paddy sparkle  
If I didn’t consider what the artist feels, then I would have told them that they sucked at art and should stop making it.

@Sprite  
big question sprite do you only criticize, lynn on near everything lynn draw? it kind gets annyo if that all u post on there comment section.

This isn’t too bad, you clearly are improving and getting a good grasp of designs and are playing around with dynamic posing. However, there’s just one major flaw with the image: The limbs. They’re missing various defining features and lines, as well as being too rubbery. The griffon is the most devious offender, but I also noticed this with your Twilight image.  
Once you figure out how the joints work and how to make them less rubbery, I guarantee you’ll start seeing a quality spike. Also the female guard’s snoot is a little awkward.