@Liggliluff thanks

@Fluttershy3005  
Okay, you don’t need to digitally draw, it’s fine as it is.
 
I do still advice starting off with a pencil and estimate the shapes of the characters and work your way down with details. I think that would improve your art further. I’ve seen you’ve improved significantly over the last 6 months alone, and you will of course improve further :)

@Liggliluff  
I dont have the technology to do edits unfortunately the only thing i can use to change stuff is da muro amd google images so i upload as is but good idea i might just do that when i somehow get better tecnology.

Instead of labelling the speech bubbles, try to place them in order. They’re usually read top left to bottom right.
 
Also; do you plan out where everything should go before you draw? Because you could try going on there phases: do a really thought sketch of where everything should go, like single lines for body parts; then sketch out the shape of their bodies. Both these phases you draw very softly with a pencil, so you can erase mistakes. Then finally you fill out the final drawing and erase your sketch lines. After that you could even digitalise it and colour it on your computer. You have access to a scanner, which makes your uploads look great.