Beautiful Rarity in that sexy lingerie, but the muzzle seems a little flat like its blending with the smile. Love the art but try to make the muzzle more distinguishable from the smile or mouth, thats why is seems off
Nearly everything in this picture is quite lovely, the lingerie especially… but oh man, Rarity’s face did not come out good here. It’s something about the muzzle specifically, it just doesn’t look right.
If I’m totally honest… it kinda looks like a Muppet’s face, but at the same time not.
..either way, I think you’ve captured Rarity’s demure side perfectly!
I gotcha. It’s hard when the view is straight on trying to keep an MLP-ish style muzzle.
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Could ya be more specific about what’s wrong? Not criticizing, it’s just “it just doesn’t look right” doesn’t help me much.