FOR ALL OF YOU WHINING ABOUT UNCENSORED PAGE PLS FUCKING STOP

You might find a uncensored one day tho

@Background Pony #339C
Okay? But 99.99 not happening

@Background Pony #086E
You’re definitely not wrong in what you’re saying, there’s not really a whole lot going on as far as the plot goes. This originally was just a commission idea of mine from a year or two ago, but then we decided to expand it into a story for the public. I honestly didn’t want to put that much effort into a narrative, I wanted it more to come off as one of those EQG shorts you can find on youtube, where it’s only a few minutes long and whatever conflict isn’t really that major and is resolved almost as soon as it arises – less for story, more just for fun. I understand it may not be as eventful as some people like their ENF, but I also feel like there’s an underrepresentation of more lighthearted stories that aren’t going for everything needs to be bigger and more explosive. Just a simple story to enjoy the scenario.

As for the silhouettes, sorry, but that’s just going to be a necessary evil we’ll be utilizing. Trust me, I would LOVE for every page in this kind of scenario to have dozens of fully detailed people all gawking at the public nudists. But the thing we have to keep in mind is that Moon Pearl is in fact human, and designing each person in detail takes time and energy, both physical and mental/emotional. It’s just too much to ask for more than a few detailed characters per panel without it being a major project that takes more than a year to complete and publish, which we’re not ready to do. Basically what the options come down to are:

Option is just the middle of the road best choice for us at the moment. All of that being said, our next project we have in mind is going to involve more students reacting to the public exhibitionist, and even a display onstage, complete with students taking pictures and video, so there will definitely be more detailed characters than this particular comic. But we’re still going to have to rely on some silhouette usage, otherwise we run the risk of the place looking empty, or taking way too long to design dozens of background characters.

Hope you can understand that we’re trying our best, even if our stuff doesn’t come out flawless. Thanks for your feedback regardless.

I think going for simple instead of complex when you’re new to something is much recommended since it will be easier to develop and easier for audiences to understand.

I really think the direction of this comic was good, it just could have used more funny or aroused reactions from the characters and less of Celestia and Luna conversing. Or at the very least, stretch the comic out a bit longer to have more reactions while still having the interactions between Celestia and Luna. In fact, I’d probably take the latter option since Celestia and Luna work off of each other well here since Celestia is more forgiving and humorously enjoying of the situation while Luna is not so forgiving and is more serious and embarrassed by the humiliation, and that part where Luna questions Celestia’s enjoyment was pretty funny.

Dont be afraid, your criticism is welcome, and you presented it in a respectful and polite way in comparison to other criticism we have received. Yes we didnt intend this comic to be a master piece in therms of story and moral delivery, when we created this comic, from the very first steps including the script, we planned it as something extremely simple, nothing complex, since this was our first attempt with a series of ENF and exhibitionism comics we are planning to create and publish, in fact, this comic was made and publish as a countermeasure since our first work related to Final Fantasy Vll didnt get the response we were hoping, and this was like, trying again with something people really like in our portfolio, in this case Equestria Girls. So yeah, it was planned to be a really REALLY simple story (hence why the number of pages of the “main story” is just nine, while the rest are pin ups). Like i said before, there are another stories planned, and they might take a while to be published since we’re only two people working on them, and usually its me, Moon Pearl/Succubi Samus who does all the lining, Color and basic art department. Once more, thank you for your input, and for give it in such respectful way. Greetings.

Okay, I hate to say this since it’s amazing how the art style is faithful to Equestria Girls and the set up to the ENF with Celestia and Luna is pretty creative, but this comic is kind of dull.

There’s not really much that goes on in this other than Celestia and Luna talking while the students stare at them with blank expressions other than one funny moment regarding the cameo from the two creators of this comic, and this comic doesn’t really have all that much of an exhibitionism atmosphere to it. I know, Celestia and Luna are naked and all the students are looking at them, but there’s too much focus on Celestia and Luna conversing and not enough on the students reacting to what is going on. There are even some shots where the students are designed as silhouettes, which I think is a serious misstep for a comic focused on exhibitionism since the point of exhibitionism is watching the characters’ reactions to the nudity or sexual activity that’s happening in front of them whether it’s funny or erotic, so other than for saving time with designing the characters, I don’t really see the point in designing them as silhouettes since we can’t really see the characters’ reactions that well. And even with the characters that do have visible reactions, they’re facial expressions to the situation again are pretty blank looking.

So, the characters are faithfully designed and the set up is pretty creative, and there are one or two funny moments, but the comic as a whole is just kind of boring. No offense to the creators since they I imagine this took a lot of time to write and illustrate, but I really think there are some improvements that could be made.

@TheJ  
Oh yeah, we absolutely do. There’s a bonus page in the full version that (kind of) hints who the next comic is going to focus on.

This was hot. I hope you plan for more of these kind of comics in the future with some of the other girls.

So sad it ended. I was enjoying it, but not as much as Celestia.

@Background Pony #67FB  
I would so like to see an artist make a gif of Celestia and Luna with nothing but their butts on display as they rock their butts back and forth as they’re walking.Similar to this gif here: https://static1.e621.net/data/4a/0c/4a0c2f894a866f1c09c4e2a0cfb71cf7.gif

@Background Pony #AAD7  
So yummy.

@Background Pony #9E3B  

 
They are both absolutely beautiful.

@Background Pony #339C  
Outside of those pinups from the uncensored version, it doesn’t take much for the imagination to see these pages uncensored in our minds. It also helps that the artist has drawn uncensored nude Celestia before and there’s plenty of show accurate NSFW art of Luna from other artists. Honestly, just being able to read this comic at all censored or not is enough for me.

As much as I love this comic. I do hope that we all get to see the uncensored version for free online someday.

Yo SS, I enjoyed the comic. And I love the nudism of Celestia & Luna. I like Celestia best. It’s like she didn’t mind being naked but Luna didn’t seem to, but still. So yeah, the comic was great and I’ll look forward to your next one. Keep up the great dude.

@Background Pony #9E3B  
Squee!

@Background Pony #2A0F  
Praise the sun! https://www.derpibooru.org/images/2026964
 
And the moon! https://www.derpibooru.org/images/2339246

@Background Pony #AAD7  
Yep. And they are an absolute beauty.

@Background Pony #2A0F  
Lol. Luckily, the artist has created plenty of those with Celestia uncensored.

I’m fine with these two being censored in this, but censoring their butts should be a crime. Never block a full moon and a shining sun.