Yes! I love it. Good character choices all around.

@ViperBits  
Yeah that part of the story was super hot. I love to see Dash squirm with her sexual desires like that

@RainbowDash69  
The post used to have many more links, both questionable and explicit, but then I was nearly banned as anything non-safe is apparently not allowed on FimFiction, even in a spoilerd form :\  
And yeah, I love that picture! Maybe you should start commissioning more stuff with submissive Dash (preferably explicit or at least questionable like that kinky pic with feet fetish and Scootaloo) rather than her being an inmate :D
 
Although I think that Dash not being able to resist is kinda meh, the the rest is quite fine. I liked that the first encounter happens and the rest just follows either under threats of Scoot exposing her and ruining the image/making her go to prison, or something along the lines. There are lots of other possibilities though, the thing described in these 4 chapters (I hope you’ve read all 4 parts) is just one of them. We’ll see if the author delivers something amazing :D

@ViperBits  
Aha I think it is awesome that you use that pic I commissioned of Scoots taking Dash on a walk on that first link ;)  
As for the second link it was super funny how Scoots completely dropped Dash at the end haha

@vaddix  
BTW, here is a topic on this subject I’ve created long ago http://www.fimfiction.net/group/206920/foalcon-punch/thread/209591/scootaloo-dom-stories  
There are several more all over the place, but so far only one story turned up to have anything even remotely resembling Dash getting dominated (come to think of it, I haven’t even seen any bestiality or other submissive fetishes with her) - http://www.fimfiction.net/story/24565/8/the-belle-tolls-for-love/the-diaries-of-a-mad-pegasus-part-1  
Who knows, it might help you or serve as clop to people in this thread.

@ViperBits
 
I could go for that. The idea is good. When RD is nearly broken, Scootaloo does the last thing she needs to do to have a totally subservant pet. It won’t be rape though. I don’t like the thought of that. Either way, RD will learn to love her Master.

@vaddix  
I do think that it will be better if the story wasn’t 100% focused around clop but still had moderate amounts of it, maybe somewhere closer to the end when Dash is nearly or already broken. I just feel that domination is hotter when lewd stuff is involved, and I am sure a lot of people would agree that the presence of clop would make the whole thing much better where it matters =P  
It is your story though, so do what you think is right.

@RainbowDash69
 
Yes. I plan there to be a lot of domination. Dash will be coaxed into craving to please her Master however she can. Scootaloo will practically have Dash’s life in her hooves.

@ViperBits  
Good enough for me! Scootadom is so sexy.
 
I hope it involves lots of domination… That’s amazing! Very awesome!

@vaddix  
Yeah, that’s what I thought too… Just didn’t want to state anything without being 100% sure. Also, you are already writing it? Neat! Don’t forget about my offer to proofread it for you! :)
 
@RainbowDash69  
It isn’t about prisoner RD, but it will have her being sexually dominated (not sure as to the degree and willingness just yet) by a flightless filly and her #1 fan. I don`t know about you, but I think this is even better! :P

@RainbowDash69
 
The story I’m currently writing involves Scootaloo dominating RD.

@vaddix  
yay! this is really cool :)
 
my dream is to have a story written about pictures like this one!!

@RainbowDash69
 
Oh, I’ll definitely write it on fimfiction. I’ll keep you both updated, I promise.

@RainbowDash69  
I believe he will post it, I’ve been bugging him to write it for months :D
 
@vaddix  
Even better!

@vaddix  
wow, how exciting. are you gonna post your story anywhere or are you gonna keep us updated in the comments? :D

@ViperBits
 
It’ll be a process. Not a one-shot.

@vaddix  
Just write the goddamn story already XD

@ViperBits  

 
I knew you’d be here. :)

@ViperBits  
me too!!

Kinky…

I want this to be a fanfic :D