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part one of Bad twilight
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but……thank you. i was going to edit my reply to say that but i fell asleep before i could,sorry.
Cool, cool. I mean I could have easily gone “YOUR ART IS HORRIBLE AND YOU SHOULD NEVER DRAW AGAIN.” or something just as useless.
But instead I said what I, a person who doesn’t know how to do art, saw as being wrong with this picture. It is by no means something horrible, as I’ve said, but there’s certainly room for improvement. That is, in a way, constructive criticism.
not to be mean or rude or nothing but with the abuse i get here im not sure how i feel about your “constructive criticism”…
The drawing is okay, but confusing. It’s just two characters floating in space, the red OC spanking Twilight for crimes unknown.
I hope that you’re able to take my criticism as constructive, as I’ve meant it to be, and best of luck with improving your artist skills.