It doesn’t look like you’re getting any comments here. So here’s a little bit of advice for what you’re doing wrong. You’re really bad at writing. You make spelling mistakes and you don’t use grammar. But the words make up most of your images. So this makes all of your images seem far worse, because people are seeing the bad writing. Unless you’re making a proper comic, there is no reason to be putting the text in the image. When you’re doing just a single image with dialogue from one person (or pony) you’re better off putting all the text in the description. That way you can fix mistakes and not need to worry about updating the image. I’ve seen others do this for when they are telling a story one image at a time, like you seem to be doing.

Although this isn’t necessary to do. Because it doesn’t fix the core problem, which is that the writing is really bad. It would just make it easier to fix. So if you want to create an audience, just don’t rush the writing. Read it afterwords. Check it. And you can put it into a spellchecker free and easy. There are online ones avaialble, but you also probably have microsoft word installed. Or maybe Open Office? Those have spellcheckers too. Or you can ask a friend to check the writing. Don’t leave out proper puntuation either.

By making it easier to read, people will be more interested in your art. I hope this helps.