#2969827 - suggestive, artist:vultraz, pinkie pie, earth pony, pony, g4, boots, butt, clothes, female, jacket, looking at you, looking back, looking back at you, mare, motorcycle, palm tree, pants, pinktober, plot, shoes, solo, tree

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PandaPastaParadise

Personally, this is underrated. How are there no comments?

Anyway, I quite like it. I appreciate the concept, the cyberlegs are cool, I like her eyes and the facial lighting especially. However, the pose could be more dynamic. More curve, less static straight pose. Instead of an S you’ve got a Z if that makes sense.

Though the twisting body is cool, you don’t see enough to appreciate it. The left arms feels like it’s coming out of their chest, but it’s very difficult so well done for doing this well. The right is fine.

The booty areas especially feel too small and narrow, like you’re missing the crotch structure and muscles. I can see it’s curving away from the viewer, so there’s perspective at play, but her barrel still appears too large in comparasson.

I can see this piece with a more twisty pose, with larger and more dynamic hips being very good! I’m happy you’re doing something interesing though!

Edit: I struggle at this myself, so I can’t give you specific do’s and don’ts. Sorry. Just one student to another.

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