@Background Pony #B439
Honestly the story is very cool, plus it’s attached to the first series with Sunny, what’s interesting is maybe it will have an impact later on with them.
It’s well composed because you feel the pain of the character perfectly, especially with the art that is well done on the character and his expression.
It would be a shame not to finish it, it has good potential ;3

@Background Pony #B439
You’ve got this mate ♥

I honestly don’t know if this will ever get finished. I truly feel like I bit off way more than I could chew with this.

@Plume
I make a new panel every few hours because I post it all in a 4chan thread. I’ve never been a very good storyteller. Also, as much as we would like people to notice our pain physically, it doesn’t really happen too often. sometimes it feels like you need to be at your absolute worst when you feel like you can’t speak. It would be weird to assume that a stranger is starving because they are skinny.

Eat now 😭

I guess Misty will see her reflection and notice she has revealed her bruise.

@Background Pony #7253
After quickly reading the comics about Sunny and her illness, I get a better sense of the author’s message, so I imagine that with Misty, things will find a positive response to that.
In any case nice work to the author for his imagination.

@Plume
Whilst I can agree the pacing of the writing is a bit off (which is perfectly fine, they made it clear from the start they weren’t writing according to a plan), don’t underestimate the ability of people to explain away things like this, especially when measures are being taken to hide the truth. With that said, yeah this may very well end in tragedy if Misty can’t stand up for herself and acknowledge her present situation is unsustainable. It’s up to her.

♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦

Love the story thus far, thank you for continuing to produce it! ♥ Hope you’re feeling okay mate

Hmm I think history has shown us enough of his daily suffering and it would be useless to add more…
On the contrary, it is time for hope to arrive with outside help that opens his eyes to his life of daily servitude and mistreatment; because alone, I doubt that she can remedy it…
I would even say that it is strange that no one, even the city authorities, has reacted to his physical condition which is quite widely visible (no clothes to hide it) and I think quite rare (in terms of abuse physical and undernutrition).
logically it should happen, or else this story will end in tragedy, suicide because there is not much else to hope for if no one helps him…

Please don’t have her throw the muffin away, she absolutely needs the nourishment.

@Background Pony #9D33
Yes.

@Background Pony #69EE
No. I don’t think so…

@Lupin Quill
I know, but which one? Is it Martine Bay Beach?

Eat it, treat yourself!
Luna knows you deserve it!

Misty, I hope you can calm down enough to enjoy treating yourself to this muffin on the shore.

She’s gonna throw it away, isn’t she…?

@Background Pony #9D33
Oh, she’s on the beach.

Where is she?