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Days after the incident with the drunk pony, Elizabeth felt better than before. She felt healthier, her coat and mane were brighter, and her wound was gone.
Even when she and Edward returned to the hospital to remove the stitches, the impressions of said stitches disappeared as if nothing had ever happened. Just seconds after the doctor took off the thread, Elizabeth on the inside felt like she was in her 20’s again.
As time rolled by, Edward and Elizabeth spent time together doing things they loved.
It was out for dinner, and Edward invited his friends to hang out. However, the boss looked at them with a sternness in his face and glaring at Edward.
Behind his and Elizabeth’s back, he made his thoughts known.
“I don’t want to see you around here again!” cried the owner after he called him and Elizabeth to him.
Edward and Elizabeth were shocked by this outburst. “Why?” questioned Edward.
“Ever since you and that drunk got into a fight, I’ve gotten less customers due to them not wanting to get involved if another breaks out, the drinks i have are not selling as well due to the drunk’s recklessness, And I don’t want that pony or his friends to see you again in my pub, I want to avoid another fight.”
“It was not my fault, I needed him to let me go to see if Elizabeth was alright!” Edward replied.
“I understand but I never wanted this to happen. I banned the drunk too, but I don’t want to risk seeing both of you in the same place together.”
“So leave!” shouted the boss as he pointed his hoof at the door.
B-but wait! Interrupted Elizabeth. You can’t do this; I want Edward to stay. Said Elizabeth as she got in between Edward and her boss.
“I’m sorry Elizabeth, but he has to leave “ he replied.
“no, i want to stay with him, i haven’t felt happier, he made me feel like i was more than what i am, i would rather go with him than stay here.” she said with passion in her voice.
Elizabeth, I apologize, but you live here. You are a prostitute and I need you to stay here and earn money. I will not allow you to leave unless I need you to do so.” replied the boss.
Edward saw how unfair her boss was but was glad to hear what Elizabeth said before. He wanted to stay with her…but a feeling of heaviness in his chest started to manifest, knowing that he would have to tell the truth of his and his friend’s past, but he had to return to the house and ask for their permission.
“Elizabeth, wait,” said Edward. Elizabeth turned to him. “Elizabeth let me go back home first and ask my friends if they are ready so you can come with me is that alright?” “Yes, Edward” Elizabeth said with a hopeful smile in her face.
Edward told the boss about this, and he said he was willing to let this slide just once, and he let Edward go.
Back at the house Edward told everyone what had happened and asked for their permission to tell the truth. This is so he can bring Elizabeth to stay.
The others looked concerned, unsure, and sad.
Dracula and the others told Edward how they felt… Edward was heartbroken.
’I am sorry, Edward. We all know Elizabeth is a kind mare. However, we do not know how she would react to our past. Even if she accepted, she cannot stay here. The house is not ready.” Answered Dracula.
“Yes,” Adam responded, “we need to install electricity to the house, indoor plumbing, restore the underground for storage, and find a method to construct a clear passage through the forest to get from here to town.”
Edward looked down and despite his disappointment he understood their reason, he had to come back and tell Elizabeth the news.
Edward sighed, “Okay, let me talk to Elizabeth.” He turned back and, as he walked sadly to the door, he said, “I’ll see you all soon.”
When Edward departed, all presents were filled with sorrow, dissatisfaction and remorse, understanding what was to come.
Edward arrived at the pub and headed upstairs to Elizabeth’s room.
Edward knocked on the door.
“Come in.” Said Elizabeth.
She looked absolutely radiant in her pristine white sleepwear gown, illuminated by the luminous beams of the luminous moon. Edward sighed deeply and told Elizabeth the news he had been reluctant to share.
Elizabeth wept, and Edward embraced her to console her.
“Please don’t cry Elizabeth.” said Edward. “But Edward, I don’t want you to leave, I want to be with you.” replied Elizabeth.
“I know Elizabeth, but I don’t want to see you like this. I saw you stand up to that drunk. You are an intelligent and sweet mare. Don’t let anyone say otherwise, alright?”
Elizabeth smiled and wiped a tear away. “Okay, Edward, I love you,” Elizabeth said. “I’m going to miss you.” “I love you too,” Edward replied. “I’m going to miss you too.”
They both shared an affectionate kiss before Edward left and closed the door behind him.
As Edward walked, he heard Elizabeth crying; he had no choice but to leave, though it was difficult to do so.
The boss said his final goodbye to Edward, and Edward did the same. Then, he left the pub for the last time, never to return again.
He sadly walked into the night. He left someone he dearly loved behind, crying. His hopes and wishes for a future filled with immense love and significance were instantly dissipated. His throat tightened as his chest filled with unbearable pain, as if he lifted an immense stone. This was a pain that no matter how rapidly his body healed, this one felt like it would remain open forever.
Once Edward arrived at the house, Adam walked over to make sure Edward was alright. Edward was silent for a bit until he said something.
“I think I would like to be alone for a while,” Edward announced before beginning his ascent up the stairs. After entering the room, he shared with Henry and closing the door behind him, he finally found some much-needed solitude.
When Edward could no longer control his tears, he went straight to bed and covered his face with arms, Henry felt horrible for Edward when he saw this unfold.
Having lost his appetite and not feeling like eating, Edward went to get his lose sleepwear and put it on before going to bed and falling asleep.
well, this is upsetting.
there is not much to say the story speaks for itself but i say a few things.
idk how these things work but for this pub and the boss, he is a bit controlling, idk maybe something happened to him that makes him want to keep a good business or idk.
but his friends felt guilty even though (i say) is understandable that they don’t feel ready yet especially since the house is not ready, they want to add the latest tech like lights and indoor plumbing which it might take a while to install and have it connect to the one in town.
i also used a rewriter thing that can help me make more refined sentences.
i hope you like it despite it being sad, but the story is not over yet.
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