Subjects of Equestria! We are pleased to kick off the Nightmare Night Festivities and the 14th anniversary of the return of our beloved Princess Luna! Join us in celebration!
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Comic by SketchyJackie  
Color by me
 
Version with colored lines.
 
Version with black lines: >>494150
 
Version with colored lines only: here

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Background Pony #D740
“@Rebel-flash Hey! That’s not nice!  
Celestia helped her clean the castle hallways.  
“T-Thank you, Sister…” Luna hugged Celestia.  
Celestia hugged her back.  
By that, the 2 continued working together to clean up the mess as faust kept on crying.
Background Pony #D740
“@Background Pony “HEY!” Celestia defeated her mother. “I WILL HELP HER CLEAN! YOU’RE NOT MY MOTHER! It’s okay, Luna. Lemme help you clean this up. Come on, Pick the mop.” She did so on. “GET THAT, MOTHER?!” Celestia yelled. “Y-Yes…” Faust said, defeated. Faust walked away scaredly looking at the 2 alicorn fillies cleaning up together as she let out a soft sigh.  
Celestia’s revenge  
The 2 fillies kept on cleaning the hallways and the carpets as celestia hugged Luna and whispered something in her ear.  
“I’m sorry, sister….I never meant to take your place in the bathroom…”  
“It’s okay.” replied Luna. “Please don’t do that again.”  
By that, The 2 fillies hugged each other and did their cleaning job as Faust cried in her bedroom.
Background Pony #04ED
@Lillian  
Did it myself, actually. Wrote it a while ago on an internet board after the original black and white image, and when I noticed it got a colored update, I went and fixed the errors and pasted it here.
ZomBrony

@Background Pony #18A0  
I actually remember doing this once.. I had to pee really bad when I went to bed and I was joking with myself about wetting the bed. But after thinking about it for a while, I actually got curious. I couldn’t remember what it felt like so I just let it out. And it actually felt really nice. As for my parents? I blamed the dog. cx
Background Pony #04ED
Luna ran down the hall of the castle, her pace quickening with each passing minute. She had been outside in the garden, when she felt the call of nature. Naturally, being in a public place, and not feeling that it was of too much immediate importance, she continued on. Not many ponies appreciated her night, the last thing she wanted to do was to run inside with her tail between her legs..
 
At first it was a simple reminder of a natural function, but soon it rose up to the front of her mind. It soon became apparent that she wouldn’t make it if she delayed, and so she found herself running around the castle looking for an entrance. By the time she was finally inside, her pressure inside had doubled that of what it was before.
 
“Gotta pee… Gotta pee. Gotta pee!” She panted out, desperately trying to find the bathroom. And yet with each passing guard, she slowed her pace a little, and tried to remain dignified. That stopped shortly, dignity be damned, she couldn’t sacrifice any time. Finally she reached her destination, the north wing bathroom. She tried to push it open, but her efforts are wasted; the door was locked.
 
“No…” She mutters under her breath. No indeed, she was Luna, and although someponies didn’t appreciate her as much, it didn’t mean she had any less authority than say… her sister! She was royalty, and that meant she had the authority to kick whoever was using the bathroom out.
 
“Under order of princess Luna, I demand whoever is in this bathroom to come out at once!” She said, voice cracking a little.
 
”Under the authority of Princess Celestia, I refuse this order.”
 
That was her sister’s voice.
 
Luna panicked, how could she forget her sister always used the only bathroom in the north wing?! The hold over her bladder weakened as the shock as to what she would need to do to find another toilet. To use the other bathroom, she would need to go back the way she came. She really didn’t think she would last long enough to reach it. There was only one course of action: begging that she let her in. Crossing her back hooves, she forces one hoof into her crotch, and uses the other to bang on the door.
 
“Tia! Let me in!”
 
”Forget it! Use the other one!”
 
Luna felt a drop of liquid penetrate her defenses, she really wasn’t going to last much longer.
 
“But it’s on the other si–”
 
”Tough!”
 
Her sister wasn’t moving. That mean her next move would either make or break her bladder. She hoped beyond hope that her bladder would last, galloping down the corridor. Another bit of liquid leaked out. That forced to stop and prevent herself from leaking. That small spurt of urine dampened her hooves and crotches, if anypony was looking, it almost look like she had sat in a small puddle.
 
“Just a little bit longer…” She pleaded, limping into the next passage. Her bladder spasmed, and she looked around. There weren’t any guards around, and as much as she hated to do it, she was out of time. She collapsed into the ground, letting her bladder unleash itself unto the carpet.
 
She backed down, sitting in the pool of her own creation. The red carpet soaks up much of the mess, but another significant part of it soaks into her coat. The feeling of relief is actually enjoyable, and she stuck her hooves into her gushing marehood, letting the juices flow around it.
 
She blushed, realizing what she was doing. If a guard came around the corner and saw her doing this…
 
The scent permeated the hallway, a thin musky scent. She felt uncomfortably hot, what she was doing was naughty. And she loved it. Finally running dry, and she looked down at her soaked, dripping yellow hooves. A part of her almost wanted to taste them.  
Curiously, she brought a hoof up to her mouth, sticking out her tongue. A delicate yellow drop hangs from it- the perfect sample.
 
”So then I explain to this mare, if you wanna-”
 
Guards. Shit. She slammed her hoof to the ground, her taste would wait for another day. Running away from her mess, she turns the corner just as the guards step into the hallway.
 
”Yeah, I agree. If you want quality- what. Who the hell did this?!”
 
Dammit, her little puddle was no longer just hers. She took this opportunity to run. If she was lucky, she would be able to clean herself up in the bathroom, removing any evidence linking to her.
 
…….
 
After a nice bath, Luna waked to the hallway where she emptied herself. She wanted to see what happened after she left. A lone unicorn guard was cleaning up the mess, the carpet would be clean soon. Exhaling, Luna turned forward- Right into her mother.
 
”Luna.”
 
Faust looked down with stern eyes. She wore a frown, and her towering height made her child a little scared of her. Luna crouched down, into an almost defensive stance. She knew she was in trouble. She decided it would be best if she lied.
 
“Hey, Mom. W-What’re you doing here?” She says, voice cracking under the gaze of her mother.
 
”Would you happen to know why there is a puddle in the middle of the hallway?”
 
“W-well, not really… Bu-”
 
”Don’t lie to me, now tell me. Why is there a puddle in the hallway?” She said, leaning into her daughter.
 
She knew. Lying did Luna no good, and all that was left was damage control.
 
“It’s not my fault the halls are so big.”
 
”Ahem…”
 
“Besides.. The red carpeting needed a new look…”
 
”Luna, there are plenty of bathrooms. Why did you chose that one your sister always uses? And for that matter, why didn’t you try to find a bathroom sooner?”
 
Luna was pressed. She didn’t want to tell her mother she was worried about what ponies would think, or what they thought of her. Jealousy was an ugly color. All that was left was what anypony would do, she told the half-truth.
 
“I thought I could handle it. I didn’t know she was inside the bathroom…”
 
”I want you to help the guard clean up your mess. Since you made it, you should clean it up.”
 
“O-Okay.” Luna said, defeated.
 
Luna turned away from her mother, lowering her head in shame as she left to go help the guard. Maybe later she could sample her own fluids, but right now she had lost all drive to do so. Her earlier interest in the puddle was gone, and all that was left was to grab a spare mop, and get to work.
Ferrotter
The End wasn't The End - Found a new home after the great exodus of 2012

Very nicely done. I think the colored lines add a lot. And kind of fortunate and/or appropriate the guard’s horn magic aura is yellow.