Story is engaging, the art is even more fantastic. There’s sweet backgrounds and pony poses. Like, this is one of the best-looking generous pony’s bedroom depictions, or when in the previous page Spike shoves Rarity’s butt out of the house with the door :p Priceless. I love how busy she is doing different stuff here. Spike couldn’t pick a worse moment for his advancements.

With nothing yet egregious occurring in the comic as of yet, y’all seem to have decided to criticize the style, yes?… Although, yes, even if his previous book did garner fan appreciation despite it’s (alledged) terrible writing thanks to the art, I suppose it can only improve. :D

The only thing i have to complain about is how you make the lighting for the pony’s body. It looks…how can i say this in the most accurate way possible…
 
They look like they are made of plastic, or that their body is all plastic-y.

Nah, I use those to keep me warm during winter. Do you know how expensive fire wood is?  
And it’s not like you made any more sense in your posts either, so what’s the big deal? This should be right in your alley…

@KI-HunterKiller  
Do you have any parabole from The Bible? I understand them better.

@Background Pony #74D6  
When I was home alone last night, I heard a knock on the window which surprised me. It was some sort of thing with large red coat over it. I was like:  
-Duuded, Santa you are a little early aren’t you and you have got the wrong entrance too!!!  
The thing didn’t speak, but it slowly the red coat started falling down and to my amazement, it revealed rarity underneath. Then I was like:  
-Duude, Rarity since when can you fly, we are on the 9th floor.  
And she was like:  
-Duude for realz? how can you tell? It’s so fuzzy around when you are this hammered. And you are right, I can’t fly …. holy shit …  
And just like that in an instant she started falling down. I ave no idea what happened after, all I saw down below was the red coat and a few bunnies jumping around … all covered in different shades of red.  
Then in the next instant, mother Theresa came out of nowhere with a large cleaver and started slaughtering the bunnies for her dinner, I assume. Don’t worry though the story has a happy ending.  
After the big explosion of the nuke, they all melted in together and lived happily ever after!!!
 
Just a little story that I taught would match your intelligence and you will understand it.

@kitsuneyoukai  
There is one thing I like about Derpibooru. Call an artist and she/he will come. It never failed me before.
 
“Taking a break fucks me up. =P”… if you say so. And maybe not taking breaks does it? In the end - it’s your choice.

@kitsuneyoukai  
You did a great job… no inconsistencies here. It will be my favourite comic.

@Background Pony #74D6  
taking a break fucks me up =P. i mostly fucked up with failing to draft the page in 1 day. and i was in a horrible mood at the time of inking too, so that didnt help smooth it out like it should of.  
the only exhausting part of multiple panels to me is the background phase. …so damn happy with panel 1 :b

Pretty pony at work. Nice page :-)

I can see fluctuations in style with this artist. Drawing so many differently multi-paneled pages must be truly exhausting, if one can’t mantain consistency. Take a break, art man.