The citadel should be taller.
 
@M107A1  
There were giant moving walls. It looks like they have been highly simplified.
 
What I would like to see is a razor train in MLP style.

I certainly don’t remember the giant wall.

@Muffinshire
 
Twilight Freeman flied off the building and did a backflip and landed and taked off again. She kept flying down the road and made sure there was no zombies around because he ddint have weapon.  
The contrysides were nice and the plants were singing and the birds and the sun was almost down from the top of the sky. the mood was set for Twilight Freemans quest to help his brother where he was. Twilight Freeman looked around the countrysides and said “its a good day to do what has to be done by me and help my brother to defeat the enemys”.  
Twilight Freeman was late so she had to fly really fast. A royal guard arship was hiden near by so when Twilight Freeman went by the cops came and wanted to give him a ticket. Here Twilight Freeman saw the first monster because the cop was posessed and had parasprites.  
“I cant give you my lisense officer” Twilight Freeman said  
“Why not?” said the parasprite oficer back to Twilight Freeman.  
“Because you are parasprite zombie” so Twilight Freeman shot the oficer in the head and flew off thinking “my brother is in trouble there” and went faster.  
Twilight Freeman had to go faster like the speed of sound and got there fast because Shining Armor needed her where he was. Twilight Freeman looked at road signs and saw “Ravenhorselm” with someons writing under it saying “u shudnt come here” so Twilight Freeman almost turned around but heard screaming like Sining Armor so she went faster again.  
Twilight Freeman flew in and did another flip n jumped off her Balloon and the baloon took out some parasprite zombies infront of Twilight Freeman. Twilight Freeman smiled and walked fast. Twilight Freeman then looked on the ground and found spel so she lerned it and fired fast at zombie goasts in front of a house.  
Twilight Freeman said “Zombie goasts leave this place” and the zombie goasts said “but this is our house” and Twilight Freeman felt sorry for them becaus they couldnt live there anymore because they were zombie goasts so he blew up the house and killed the zombie goasts so they were at piece.  
Then Twilight Freeman herd another scream from her brother so she kept walking really faster to get where he was. Ravenherdldm was nothing like the countrysides there was no birds singing and the pants were dead and teh dirt was messy and bloody from parasprites.  
When Twilight Freeman got to where the screaming was started from she found her brother Sinning Armor Freeman fightin the final bosss and Shining said “Twilight Freeman! Over here!” so Twilight Freeman went there to where Gordon Freeman was fighting. Twilight Freeman fired her energy from teh horn really fast and the energies went and shot the final boss in the eyes and the final boss couldnt see.  
Shining Armor Freeman said “its time to end this ones and for all!” and punched the final boss in the face and the final boss fell. John Freeman said “thanks i could help, bro” and Gordon Freeman said “you should come here earlier next time” and they laughed.  
The laughed overed quickly though because Twilight Freeman yelled “LOOK OUT BRO!” and pointed up to the top of the sky. Shining Armor Freeman looked up and said “NOO! Twilight Freeman run out of here fast as you can!” and Twilight Freeman walked real fast out.  
Twilight Freeman loked back and saw Shining Armor get steppd on by the next boss and she was mad and angry.  
“I’ll get you back evil boss!” Twilight Freeman yelled at the top of lungs.  
to be continued..?

@Muffin  
John Freeman is my homeboy.

Wake up…Miss Sparkle…wake up and…smell the ashes…

Twilight Freeman who was Gordon Freeman’s sister was one day in the library writing on a scroll. She got a message from her brother that said that aliens and monsters were attacking his place and aksed her for help. Twilight Freeman got her scroll packed away and wet on the platform to go up to the roof of the building where she left her hot air balloon and normal pony close because she was in her librarian outfit. Twilight Freeman got in her balon and said its time for me to live up to my family name and face full life consequences” so she had to go.

Yes. All of my want.