It’s gotten bad when even fan works have Starlight depicted where she was just in it for the power instead of the far more dangerous ‘she thought she was HELPING ponies by brainwashing, removing part of who they were, and making them spy on each other. And she did it all thinking she was HELPING THEM.’

What a nice and sweet little comic. Very well written, AcidEmerald, I liked reading it very much!

Great comic!

This was wonderful, I had tears in my eyes at the end.
 
and could see something similar could happen in Seren if they would make a new Trixie episode..

Pretty good

This is an excellent story. I love it!

nice comic, reminds me of the tumblr blog of trixie and maud becoming lesbies and have many deep emotional conversations about their personal feelings and relationship while a pretty normal story is goin on. =)

Thanks! And yes, of course I’m fan of FouDubulbe (Can’t spell it without looking up first…).
 
@JD2K  
By all means please point out grammar errors, for I’m not native English speaker and need to learn!
 
And yes, I love making up explanations for some canon inconsistencies in twisted way. That’ll be pretty much my style.

This was a nicely written comic. I agree with the sentiment that this may make a great fan-episode. There were a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing to really grammar-n@z1 over.
 
Plus I like how the artist explained why Maud wasn’t present at Pinkie’s first party in Cutie Mark Chronicles other than “we decided to bring in a new character! An older sister for Pinkie! What? She didn’t appear in the flashback. Oh, everyone isn’t going to notice that! Huehuehuehue!”
 
That I think was a nice touch in explaining and giving her more insight. All in all, a good job.

What a nice story.

I’m not sure if Maud kinda speaks more than she should during her breakdown but it would make sense tbh. Overall, this feels like an epilogue or an aftermath like a what-if on Foudouble’s Maud/Trixie comic and it’s simply well done.
 
Would love to see it as a fan-made episode.

GOod comic.