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Page six! Silly Sonata and Poor Aria.

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BlazingDazzlingDusk
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Got a funny thing you could incorporate here perhaps.
Have Adagio dreaming with the song reaching a climax “ahhhAHHH”, and finishing with her waking up screaming “Arrgh!”.
Sounds funny in my own mind, don’t know if it’d work as well on paper.
 
That sounds hilarious! I’ll definitely think about incorporating it.
40kponyguy
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AimingToPlease,OftenMiss
@BlazingDazzlingDusk  
Just voicing my opinions. Glad to see you’re taking note.  
Definitely seen an improvement in your drawings.  
Just compare this recent one of yours >>1024882  
with this older one >>1014080
 
The scoring reflects the improvement too.
 
Oh yes, I remember saying in a previous comments’ section that I was watching a couple of comic series here.  
Birth of Equestria. First few pages here Currently 83 pages worth of ridiculously cute story.
 
And Rogue Diamond. Anthro versions of the characters in an alternate universe setting.  
Love the designs on these characters, but it is a much darker story than the other, and has a little adult humour.  
First page here Currently at 103 pages.  
If you just want an idea of what the artist did with the characters, this is the first time we see Rarity in that comic >>649510
40kponyguy
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Crystal Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
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AimingToPlease,OftenMiss
Got a funny thing you could incorporate here perhaps.  
Have Adagio dreaming with the song reaching a climax “ahhhAHHH”, and finishing with her waking up screaming “Arrgh!”.
 
Sounds funny in my own mind, don’t know if it’d work as well on paper.
40kponyguy
Shimmering Smile - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of Equestria Girls!
Crystal Roseluck - Had their OC in the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
Flower Trio - Helped others get their OC into the 2023 Derpibooru Collab.
King Sombra - Celebrated the 10th anniversary of The Crystal Empire!
A Lovely Nightmare Night - Celebrated the 12th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Princess of Love - Extra special version for those who participated in the Canterlot Wedding 10th anniversary event by contributing art.
Tree of Harmony - Drew someone's OC for the 2022 Community Collab
Elements of Harmony - Had an OC in the 2022 Community Collab
Kinship Through Differences - Celebrated the 11th anniversary of MLP:FIM!
Verified Pegasus - Show us your gorgeous wings!

AimingToPlease,OftenMiss
Art’s consistent at least. Only thing I’d point out is, people tend to read left to right, and down the page.  
So, Sonata’s comment in that top panel should be above Aria’s, as it’s evident she speaks first.
 
Pretty obvious where this is going now.  
Got a snarky comment lined up for Aria here?  
Or is there going to be a revenge scene where Adagio returns the favour?
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Makes sense in October
If Aria’s smart, maybe she’ll at least make it look like Sonata was the one that bucketed Adagio. Then again, Adagio might go after both of them anyway.  
Then again again, if Aria were smart, I’m not sure she’d be doing this at all. :/