@a6p
 
Thanks for the feedback. I’ll keep all this in mind.

Not bad, but the anatomy here really contrasts with the anatomy of your past pics. Did you heavily use a reference for the lower torso, here? That’s not a bad thing, just wondering.
 
Also, try squishing your boobs together a little more. Or if you wish to have them more spaced out (which is also valid to do), don’t add a convex line from the center of the bra up her left breast. It makes it look like she has a third, small center boob.
 
Lastly, if your trying to focus on more detail in a pic, don’t skimp out on the wings. The lack of detail clashes with the rest of the picture.